Do you think Johnny Cash singing a cover of Nine Inch Nails' "Hurt" is the funniest thing ever, or the coolest thing ever? - Genuinely Interested in Des Moines

On a humorical note, it's funny. The earnestness however, suggests a health issue. I'm confused.

I don't know why you have been flagged as a plagiarizer, don't want to know, and have not read any of your other poems, and don't know why Dark Angel is down on you; but then he's down on me too. This poem is good! Except that if you were perfect, you wouldn't have to look for the cheapest gas.

I know those 3 under different terms all offering joy and hope

Whoa I love this poem. . . you haven't really lost hope though have you?

Complicated, a riddle maybe. Like "This man's father is my father's son."

Interesting enough. The cliches are best when they fit together though. Best bits - She's driving me over the edge/ stuck in the trunk' and 'dawns on me/ sun is rising'

I presume that "You" is God and this poem is a prayer. I don't go along with God bringing darkness upon us and then rescuing us from it time and again, but I won't hold that against you. 9

what do you mean by 'real'.

Deity, not diety. Unless "you" are obese. Pretty funny.

JB, Why the infatuation with the vile and depraved? There is more to life than unencumbered sexual desire. Your writing could be so much better if not for your lack of emotional depth and maturity.

I give you a TEN... minus ten. Heh. You're not a very nice person, and your poetry follows your attitude - it's not nice either.

Broken down in simplicity: Excellent!

Beautiful wordplay... well thought out... beautiful overall.

throughout

Sorry, I don't know what you're talking about.

Compelling. Quite remeniscent of Foucault's Madness and Civilization.

Yea, I preach this to myself sometimes. It's surprising how well it works.

I like this, especially the last line. I wish you would not use such distracting spacing though.

Это отличное стихотворение. Мне радо было видить стихи написаные на русском языке.