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20 most recent comments by Sasha (101-120)

Re: An art undone by Bobjim 15-May-04/12:10 PM
o'erdone
Re: Ash Wednesday by Dreamer 15-May-04/12:50 PM
I think I'll go cry now.

regarding some deleted poem... 15-May-04/12:51 PM
What the hell?
Re: Not Real by DeadtotheWorld 15-May-04/12:51 PM
Reason/season

yeuch
regarding some deleted poem... 15-May-04/2:47 PM
What the fuck?
Re: Tripping Through A Paper Square by Shardik 15-May-04/3:05 PM
guff
Re: The Unseen by cuddlytiger17 15-May-04/4:57 PM
This is quite sick.

I'm sorry you have to deal with this.

And zodiac, those pictures were absolutely disgusting, did you really have to?
Re: me. by opiate 15-May-04/6:34 PM
Is this a nightmare or a bad LSD trip? Then again, I remember the time I was caught in a spiderweb in the heart of the desert in a hollow tree trunk. I was in Las Vegas and they gave me some sort of weird concoction to drink and when I woke up I was out in the Nevada desert. Sound familiar?
Re: she. by opiate 15-May-04/6:37 PM
TOLKEIN IS DEAD. Unless you are Tolkein frozen cryogenically within minutes of death and then subsequently revived, which you are plainly not, please refrain from appropriating images, motifs and names (tinuviel) from The Lord of The Rings. Otherwise go to one of the multitudinous fanfic sites where you can write about gimli assraping an elf.

Thank you
Re: tribute by francis nor capule 16-May-04/7:52 AM
Read the masters. Learn about them so that you can forget later.
Re: and the world evolves by peaceseeker 16-May-04/11:59 AM
"live and love inside my universe" sounds like an anglophone Catullus on a bad day.

The whole thing seems a quasi-religious litany to some weird semi-deified entity known as "you." However "you" is most certainly not human because "you" is unable to air "your"m pain in reality. Then again "you" is also not omnipotent because "you" is not the one in whose universe the "living and loving" is done.

Please explain who this mysterious "you" is.

Thank you
Re: 42 by brazen 16-May-04/12:11 PM
HITCHHIKER'S GUIDE

Just because it's a good book.

-10-
Re: One More Mile by marvelis 16-May-04/12:12 PM
Clichééééééééééééééééééééééé!
Re: Oomphless by shwenatjadeflower 16-May-04/7:04 PM
Nono

Drop all of the last line except the first and last word. Then capitalize the last word
Re: Title by large_geese 19-May-04/7:35 PM
Marvelous, stupendous, and bad.
Re: leaving by elizabethann 19-May-04/7:37 PM
fine
does this rhyme?
Re: I Had by Spindle 19-May-04/7:37 PM
not bad. -8-
Re: Sonnet Eighteen by devilishnutcase 19-May-04/7:40 PM
I could compare you to a summer’s day,
But see, you are far hotter and too sweet,
And summer is quite transient; will not stay
And after parting, leaves no one in heat.
Sometimes the pleasures in a summer’s glow
Leave one too lonely in their warmth too numb,
Without another heart that one can know
And in the night it fades to gloom and glum.

But see, your warmth and beauty shine a ray
That but grows sweeter in the thrill of night,
And leaves one yet in heat when you’re away,
And ever so your glory will bloom bright.
For you will shine, eternal as a star,
When these lines are forgotten as most are.
Re: Unwed by gilded in gold 19-May-04/8:24 PM
This title means: "Covered in gold, in gold"

I'm sure any monkey with some caffein and refrigerator letter-magnets could do better.

Here's a 6 so you don't hurt yourself
Re: Hmm... by tre 19-May-04/9:10 PM
No


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