Re: Sacrosanct Oligarch by Frass	24-Aug-02/1:33 PM
it looks a bit better in the light of day... a bit 7/10!
Re: American Haiku 2 by memorybabe	22-Aug-02/1:53 AM
ah.... i see, see that wasn't so hard to explain...i can dig that...very well. carry on with your kerouacian (american) haikus...<on the road> again..../neal and sal/getting high/on wine spotioti/......i think i did one too.splendid...caio..l
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	22-Aug-02/1:42 AM
but since we're here are you implying that my lyrics suggest a tom waitish sound...cuz i still do believe you have yet to even 'hear' the 'sound' que no? or have you heard it?. doubt that...so what your saying is that "it"(my song about a childs crush on ann sexton) 'sounds' like tom w. but without actually ever hearing it ..yet...fascinating?, and how long have you been capable of this mind expanding anomally...you sir are definitely a cad, and an evil telepathic midget cloner....i assure you if you heard the song waits would be the fifth name that mouth popped not the first...the first would probably be...more jeff buckly, or leonard cohen, but who's to say really..i never took the waits thing as an insult anyway...i just despise assumersa
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	22-Aug-02/1:30 AM
has memorybabe's honor been restored! how benign..i guess i win the welcome back cotter pez dispenser..i will treasure it forever...good evening sir, i'm off to hunt down psuedo dark brown angels....while my nemises is slumbering....yes..when the cat's away the mice shall play...barry manilow jingles, and wine the goat cheese..baa..bah...silence ye goats! the trolls are afoot'. excuse me sir...i'm on a mission! my goats are udderly contemptuous..do forgive..ta
Re: Ring Toss by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/1:19 AM
lets ray liotta your brain for hannibal! then feed it to your tolkien spewing lips! ahhhhhh. may sauron syrup your femurs!??
Re: I am Darkness by Dreamer	20-Aug-02/4:50 PM
lololololololololol! you are so scary and dark, you steal my poodles bark..you are so huge and black..you shrivel Jesu's ball sac...indeed you're the spine of the night, you assholed my mighty mag light...oh jesu oh jesu, please rectumfy my fears! lol! what shall we do...fleeeeeeee!
Re: World Crashes Down by SoulSlippedAway	20-Aug-02/4:40 PM
Do not listen to the winged avenger, he's just bitter, but he's also got the talent to back up his point, so yes, you're dismissed, carry on winged one, next victim please!
Re: Return to Kadath by razorgrin	20-Aug-02/4:29 PM
some mountains cast shadows in all directions simultaneously....7/10
Re: The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus	20-Aug-02/1:26 PM
hey z..worry not..i don't get mad. i just pretend too..please, after browsing his shite..i lol! anyway..what a joke..i'm seriously concerned for the future of writing though...don't mention it by the way (my cordial invite)..any time...i'm shower bound see you in 30 minutes. loved your re-edit of warmer climes ..i might have to move my computer locations soon...the illiterate children are scythed handed and mob clustered in the streets outside all of my hideouts...theyre so damn cute and little bussed in their motivations...you've almost gotta respect that.right? right!
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Aug-02/1:13 PM
yeah..you're write d.a., have no fear my work is almost done here..i've just been using this site to get my rants on..then i cut and paste it all in a word file, chop, chop, chop it up edit the fuck out of it, and use the material for this top secret writng experiment, we've got shaved monkeys hooked up to more lab equipment than i care to describe(cuz i can't) the govs got my family held hostage until i finish, oh , by the way...they're onto you too..so lock the doors and bar the windows...don't let them get you under their thumb man..i haven't slept in two weeks and they've been feeding me lysergic acid dipped meal worms....plus this site is hardly the muse i wanted for creative inspiratiuon, but no ...they don't care...they just telepathically send me the agenda, and hold the straight blade to mothers jugular...i am so fucking scared, and traumatized...i don't think i'll last much longer..pray for me..please!
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Aug-02/1:03 PM
wow.. christ of..not withstanding the bachus tyrade? i am bachus you comprehending master of reading into things (i just finished one for you called gangbox, at gangbox.com under mp3, it's for you, the holy ghost, and ponchus pilot, enjoy) that bacchian tyrade was for earthtalker the queen of the uknseen..and for an encore, read why bachus want's to kill opie, then keep talking shit cuz i have all kinds of ' good stuff waiting for you too sweet cheeks..me and my 'team' are construing a great animated series, just for you guys, let me know if your balls have dropped yet so my animators can be anatomically accurate, thanks..anything else christoff? just let me know if i can help you with any thing anything at all, cuz i'm here for you young man...waiting.....you're gonna love it when it's done, and you're friend's will too...keep an eye out...i hope you have a stronger stomach then writing style, cuz this is really gonna piss you the fuck off...better buy a gun, or a faster keyboard..you're gonna need it. love your 'grandma dying forgotten in a retirement home getting mouth raped by paco the knee hung orderly'. prepare! p.s i'm just kidding, i really like you, if not love you...see my cross hanging between my ample powerful pectorial muscles, smile and hang well young man, hang like your mothers beef curtains...feel free to quote it all at the retirement home..loverboy....i will.
Re: Dear Ms. Sexton by <{Baba^Yaga}>	20-Aug-02/12:47 PM
keep on driving your ford across america sweety cuz your haikus are so important and stimulating, memory babe, memorybabe..you really have let me down...i hope you don't ever stop driving, we need more people like you looking for a life in a better place. i hope you find it...do me a favor pick up as many hitchhikers with scary bags that you possibly can. it's worth it. trust me. everyone! let's read memorybabes emotionally rewarding haikus. trust me they're way fucking worth it. if for any reason. what not to do..ever.
Re: seven rings by memorybabe	20-Aug-02/12:13 AM
When my phone rings seven times then stops..that's satan saying ..goodnight my sweet child eating minion..on that note..i wish you all sweet dreams...
Re: American Haiku 2 by memorybabe	20-Aug-02/12:09 AM
Look up haiku..please for the love of writing..this is barely even freeform..this is barely even bare....god let it fucking end...please. here i'll show you a real haiku.............ready...good....../memorybabe writes/what she hopes might be haikus/It's a shame they're not/..................see not hard at all, see, it goes 5/7/5. count or be eaten alive..better luck next time deary..
Re: Untitled by purplestain	20-Aug-02/12:01 AM
Someday someone will show you how to write, hopefully before you try again..
Re: American Haiku by memorybabe	19-Aug-02/11:59 PM
Or back to where it originatd from...the horse drawn wagon.
Re: Loss by dave78981	19-Aug-02/11:57 PM
to personally aloof, how are we supposed to know what this really means to you? this is for you, not us. so, journal your burn elsewhere. or make it more available for us to enjoy also..
Re: a moment through the window of a northbound commuter train by dave78981	19-Aug-02/11:50 PM
Enjoyably morbid...race on to your destinations!
Re: The Big Blue White Guy by Modulo	18-Aug-02/4:25 PM
In a class all it's own! Special ed.
Re: uh oh by evergreen	18-Aug-02/10:20 AM
Now right a version from their perspective...here allow me in haiku for you....With beer goggles on/I scraped the barrels bottom/There's your barking gash!