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uh oh

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Jul 2002 · 7 comments

i awoke with aching head tried to focus on my bed and i see to my surprise another pair of bleary eyes i almost moaned i almost cried to see a pair of smeary eyes then i wonder maybe in vain what the hell is your first name?

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7 comments

[9] pkdrunner 14-Jul-02/12:22 PM Reply

Excellent! At least there was only one other pair of eyes :)

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 18-Aug-02/10:05 AM Reply

Yeah LOL! nice 1! It's so cool to get drunk! Woiiiiiii beer! Nice one lads!

[4] <{Baba^Yaga}> 18-Aug-02/10:20 AM Reply

Now right a version from their perspective...here allow me in haiku for you....With beer goggles on/I scraped the barrels bottom/There's your barking gash!

[7] Tarquin De La Bog 19-Aug-02/6:04 PM Reply

Nice. 7. Simple and to the point. A predictable ending, but a pleasant enough ditty nevertheless.

[6] SoulSlippedAway 23-Aug-02/7:34 PM Reply

thank you for pointing that out,I hadn't relized that I left the 's' out of the title

[8] horus8 21-Nov-03/7:43 PM Reply

Heek!

[10] The_Third_Isis 22-Nov-03/8:14 PM Reply

Joe black.