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uh oh
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Free verse
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evergreen
i awoke with aching head tried to focus on my bed and i see to my surprise another pair of bleary eyes i almost moaned i almost cried to see a pair of smeary eyes then i wonder maybe in vain what the hell is your first name?
Tarquin De La Bog
19-Aug-02/6:04 PM
Nice. 7. Simple and to the point. A predictable ending, but a pleasant enough ditty nevertheless.
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