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American Haiku (Haiku) by memorybabe Ford Pushing through I-80
on through to Cleveland
or California
Up the ladder:
Jim Shady.
Down the ladder:
Fallen Leaves From a Tree
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Posted: August 19, 2002 10:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2002 10:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.577378 Overall Rank: 12583 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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19-Aug-02/11:59 PM
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Or back to where it originatd from...the horse drawn wagon.
I think a haiku needs to suggest more than this, which just sounds like a route planner. As an English reader, this means nothing to me.
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