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Haiku № 10042

Loss

by dave78981

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

"All my memories have burned to ash," you say as we walk down Charles Street

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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> 19-Aug-02/11:57 PM Reply
to personally aloof, how are we supposed to know what this really means to you? this is for you, not us. so, journal your burn elsewhere. or make it more available for us to enjoy also..
[n/a] dave78981 20-Aug-02/4:31 AM Reply
it's not up to me to explain the poem's meaning... find your own meaning in it... besides, haiku is supposed to evoke a scene