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Loss (Haiku) by dave78981
"All my memories have burned to ash," you say as we walk down Charles Street

Up the ladder: A flow
Down the ladder: Pain

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9809
Posted: August 19, 2002 10:31 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2002 10:31 PM PDT
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[5] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 19-Aug-02/11:57 PM | Reply
to personally aloof, how are we supposed to know what this really means to you? this is for you, not us. so, journal your burn elsewhere. or make it more available for us to enjoy also..
[n/a] dave78981 @ | 20-Aug-02/4:31 AM | Reply
it's not up to me to explain the poem's meaning... find your own meaning in it... besides, haiku is supposed to evoke a scene
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