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Free verse № 15397

Pain

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Sep 2002 · 0 comments

Sadness fills my heart today, Should I ignore it , or run away? My heart impaled with wounds so deep, Scaring myself as quietly I weep These wounds inside shall never heal, I cannot stand this pain I feel. I sit alone , confused about life, Staring longingly at the knife. Should I ignore it , forget it's there? No-one else seems to care. Should I runaway , leave it behind, No-one would notice , everone's blind. I have nothing to live for now, I might aswell take my final bow. As the curtain falls and all goes black, It's over now no refunds back Now my lifes at its best, I'm peacefull now that i'm at rest. No sadness no pain no wounds inside, I am alone now , no need to hide. by Stacey Jones

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