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Pain (Free verse) by Artificial_Sweetner
Sadness fills my heart today,
Should I ignore it , or run away?
My heart impaled with wounds so deep,
Scaring myself as quietly I weep
These wounds inside shall never heal,
I cannot stand this pain I feel.
I sit alone , confused about life,
Staring longingly at the knife.
Should I ignore it , forget it's there?
No-one else seems to care.
Should I runaway , leave it behind,
No-one would notice , everone's blind.
I have nothing to live for now,
I might aswell take my final bow.
As the curtain falls and all goes black,
It's over now no refunds back
Now my lifes at its best,
I'm peacefull now that i'm at rest.
No sadness no pain no wounds inside,
I am alone now , no need to hide.
by
Stacey
Jones
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9810
Posted: September 16, 2002 3:00 PM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2002 3:00 PM PDT
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