Re: The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit	29-Oct-02/4:39 PM
I thought you said "tartness in its fart". i appologies.t
Re: Sympathy for a Pig by phbiscuit	29-Oct-02/7:40 PM
wow that's pretty intense shit..heres a 10.
Re: can't by nentwined	29-Oct-02/7:45 PM
i would end with fuck this can't...totally appropriate use of mood and insomnia and achieving ones listed goals. proud of yeah. fuck that last can though. take this 9 and filet mignon gift basket.
Re: Are you spreading it? by Voth269	29-Oct-02/7:52 PM
ha ha! you are completely mooning the choir, what's next. finger banging the bird's bath, collecting clippings from the private boys shavery. tampon string dental floss. guess what? you're FIRED! box up your shite and go. bastard..
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Oct-02/7:57 PM
you ever take a shit and forget to make sure there was enough toilet paper before dropping your friends off at the pool...and then discovering that there wasn't use a nice new maroon hand towel than ring it out and put it up on the shower rod to air dry? i bet, and i would wager daily.l
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/12:56 AM
i'm sorry, but this beats allo...me and your father..we're just damn proud, and mr.jones found it right away and everything. here's a ten, and a polish rag for the harp.10!
Re: arise by daniella	4-Nov-02/1:08 AM
very wiccan and savy. here's a 9. visually pleasing and overall laden with hope and mystery in a timeless sorta way.9.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/1:11 AM
a bit strained but, i liked the last line and the confinement of it all...here's a 6.
Re: Untitled by vulcan	4-Nov-02/1:15 AM
the fifth line deserves a nine by itself, i enjoyed this read, because, of not only the acorn, but the sense of pan. and loveless songs to the infinite.
Re: At the Bottom of a Well by phbiscuit	4-Nov-02/1:18 AM
YOU LIE! i see the ring from the bottom of the well! THE RING! and little girls with wet hair and horses and carlos castenada and snoopy? unfortunately this was extremely boring, but the ring wasn't..thank god for naomi watts. watts upo!@ 5.
Re: Suburban Horror by phbiscuit	4-Nov-02/1:20 AM
to hell add to hell at the end and it would be a sonic sonnet..here's a 7.
Re: .:|Mindfucked|:. by emman	5-Nov-02/2:38 PM
this is quite charming and true. 10.??
Re: .:|bittersweet|:. by emman	5-Nov-02/2:41 PM
yes.this piece also is worth its weight in gold. a binding read through and through. 9.w
Re: Hells Game by Katie	5-Nov-02/2:44 PM
change all of the "yous" to toaster. and the "yours" to pickle-bumps. carry on.??
Re: Elegy for Lonnie Donegan by Nicholas Jones	5-Nov-02/2:49 PM
foghorns are made out of t-rex's footprints and walpole's skunk stripe white. here's a nine for ya! 9. i still don't like you very much though.??
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/2:54 PM
lose the last last line for total potency...grow me a summer is dashing! and change some of your fogs to mists or steam or wind held moistures collected i don't know anything but four fogs or was it three..great imagery, as i've come to expect from you. be wellt
Re: You'll Never Hear by confuzdlilgirl	5-Nov-02/5:24 PM
because you taste like flat soda in a sock...quite frankly.4.???
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Nov-02/3:19 PM
lol.
Re: Cantos part mmx (The Mud Poem) by bondjedi	6-Nov-02/3:20 PM
this is shit. pun or no pun. 0.
Re: i am genius personified by bondjedi	6-Nov-02/3:22 PM
better. better keep faking it. clod. 8.