Re: Daywalker by Blade	10-Oct-02/1:26 PM
haha. this is pure third legging the hula hoop. you fail. miserably. ha.lol! 0.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-02/1:28 PM
who longs to be, might work better. but i'll give you a one for plunging. ha.1. a tapur might also work better.
Re: The Thought Of It by Christof	10-Oct-02/1:29 PM
neato. pretty damn neato. 6.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Oct-02/3:29 PM
somehow the last line didn't work on me the way i wanted it to. still brilliantly spun. 8.'
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Oct-02/3:11 PM
"dewy dunegrass", does it for me. (incredibly) in your face imagery and honesty also. i wish i knew, answers the question.n
regarding some deleted poem...	17-Oct-02/1:53 PM
i'm speechless, wow, shit...tell me about it. lol! this gets the horus8 AWARD FOR DOING A LITTLE TURN ON THE CAT WALK prize for aCHIEVment in reminding me why i ran like hell.all you need is another ten year reunion to really make the ears ring. schwing!10
Re: Woke Up by brazen	18-Oct-02/4:03 PM
really takes off in the second stanza, and finishes nice. i give you a 69. oh. can't go that high..i see...than an 8. for you and your mate
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-02/4:20 PM
i was at that gathering and can vouch for most of it...how is the boatman these days? still plaing cards with geyron? great descriptive dandys in this ditty. 7.
regarding some deleted poem...	18-Oct-02/4:22 PM
taxidermied, and tuched in for elvis. i gyrate my pelvis. then leave the building. 8.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Oct-02/12:47 PM
i'll put this one in my hut for save keeping. the grapes are for squashing and moshing. late night tossing. 9. the witches PICK O' THE DAY, O'TAY!". now i'm of to play. the captain. someone put me down, please, this shite is breaking me.
Re: journey to being the top rapper by kliq	23-Oct-02/12:13 PM
you're funny, but not like pooh with a handful of honey.. you want a duel..go get your snaps..it's on to lasvegas.i'm the king at craps..seven, eleven or haven't you heard..i'm in your grandma's bathroom and i'm doing the bird..but not to over step my highschool brain..that's why they call me Lord Celophane. Bitchh
Re: George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom	23-Oct-02/12:25 PM
perhaps than you are a FUCKING TEN LB. GALLSTONE SQUEEZING YOUR TINY FUCKING HEAD OUT OF MY URETHRA AND THEN plop tidal wave from the toilet...legs fly out from under neath me..me head cracks toilet...u.p.s rings doorbell...WHAT! WHAT!..."sir we have your anrthrax right here"....pie in my face. you sir are tasteless..
Re: George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom	23-Oct-02/12:26 PM
part 3? part 3? lol! wow! you leave tons to mystery with the first two. could you please jettison from your vehicle soon, on i 75. thanks.
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/12:45 PM
doesn't ring any bells to me, but than again you're the road-scholiar.t
Re: one man opponent by chinstrap	23-Oct-02/12:56 PM
why?>'
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/1:11 PM
well..you got me to laugh, and it's really well written. only one or two typos that i could recall, and an interesting twist..did you know that the word "god", comes from the word "gored" after the boar gored you know who in his side in the garden, after that they called him the "gored one" and then that became goed then god! trumpets blast and herald your beautifully told tale...not all muscular half gods were twits, take theseus for example he was strong fast and very intelligent...but hercules was indeed an ass..
Re: My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus	26-Oct-02/1:07 PM
Bachus is an undesirable loathsome wretch of a man with a very tiny mind and penis..i doubt he even remembers what he ate for lunch on a daily basis..poor cad. i fear his beak hasn't fully recovered from the beak hoof war of 1777.
Re: still, i am her by daniella	26-Oct-02/1:14 PM
whatever you do never let em see you sweat. the satanists..that is. homewreckers.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Oct-02/10:34 AM
bitchin. now bury yourself for the inevitable maggotry.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Oct-02/10:38 AM
also spectacular..i sense that you're a bit bored these days..i guess once one figures out the inane difference between 'you're' and 'your' life gets a little predictable...here, i'll join you. o woe.