on 1 by Crakyamuni
15 Jul 2003, 7:07 PM
Amen
on Prison Dinner 'Lady' by scitz
15 Jul 2003, 8:31 PM
Yes!
on A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend
23 Jul 2003, 6:06 PM
Jim was not overated, Paris was.
on Departing Suburbia by Caducus
25 Jul 2003, 12:21 PM
Seven lines up from the bottom is missing a word "be".
on The man by highnightmaregurl
25 Jul 2003, 1:23 PM
He-pan (Free cookware) by ahighgurl
Master's of the Tuniverse
Follow He-pan,
He knows the way,
Hes got your eggs.
It's He-panned out,
Day by day.
You may not like em,
There's no yolk.
It's right for toast,
Or rump roast.
Follow He-pan,
He snaps the training bra,
He'll get you boobs up,
Even if you don't nipple mouth
Your prayer.
Don't shed a tupperware,
He's air.
Ready to take your pussy hair.
An floss
He is the He-pan,
Follow him,
He has the secret knock
to get to Skilletor.
Master's of the Tuniverse
Follow He-pan,
He knows the way,
Hes got your eggs.
It's He-panned out,
Day by day.
You may not like em,
There's no yolk.
It's right for toast,
Or rump roast.
Follow He-pan,
He snaps the training bra,
He'll get you boobs up,
Even if you don't nipple mouth
Your prayer.
Don't shed a tupperware,
He's air.
Ready to take your pussy hair.
An floss
He is the He-pan,
Follow him,
He has the secret knock
to get to Skilletor.
on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy
25 Jul 2003, 11:44 AM
I'm not one to preach, but I assure you this is a third too long. A great story, a touch fat.
on some deleted poem
17 Jul 2003, 10:09 AM
A few typos here and there.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2003, 6:47 PM
You don't have enough talent to piss me off, but I have enough popcorn to watch you try. Asl?
on The War and Dance of The Undertaker by OnTheOtherHand
15 Jul 2003, 8:34 PM
"While Time and Death were did a slow waltz with you" What the fuck does that mean?
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2003, 6:57 PM
Say what I mean? Here, let me slow it down for you.
1. You're not funny
2. You are horribly ugly & fat & pock marked
3. I believe you can't be trusted
4. Because you're a nigger jew
5. Drugs or not I think I'm speaking quite clearly
6. Here, watch this
7. Your writing is weak and boring and I can't get into it because, I believe people that have ass fetishes and like fucking kids and animals because thay feel guilty about their parent's money or their 'no one understand's my genius groping' to be boring and only sub moderately amusing on 'b' list holidays.
8. In a nutshell, I would appreciate your attempts at belittling me in the future, or the ones from our past even, if they were more intelligent and less self absorbed.
9. Thank you, shut the door on the way out please Stephanie.
1. You're not funny
2. You are horribly ugly & fat & pock marked
3. I believe you can't be trusted
4. Because you're a nigger jew
5. Drugs or not I think I'm speaking quite clearly
6. Here, watch this
7. Your writing is weak and boring and I can't get into it because, I believe people that have ass fetishes and like fucking kids and animals because thay feel guilty about their parent's money or their 'no one understand's my genius groping' to be boring and only sub moderately amusing on 'b' list holidays.
8. In a nutshell, I would appreciate your attempts at belittling me in the future, or the ones from our past even, if they were more intelligent and less self absorbed.
9. Thank you, shut the door on the way out please Stephanie.
on rainday by Bill Z Bub
15 Jul 2003, 7:10 PM
A dandy.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
Typo, line two.
"Thank you".
Otherwise an 8.
"Thank you".
Otherwise an 8.
on S c r e a m by Kitch
15 Jul 2003, 7:14 PM
Must... Release...Sperm... Must... ma..
on Phone Support: To Lee by http://mulberryfairy
11 Jul 2003, 8:49 PM
One of the best poems I've read, today. 10! Funny & dramtic and that's not always easy to do. Welcome to poemranker, now I must go pray to penis for rent, Adieu.
on The Bearded Men by walrus8
25 Jul 2003, 11:41 AM
Aint that the truth.
on My Angel of Darkness by goddessbyfire
21 Jul 2003, 7:26 PM
poop.
on A comment for Me (Aj) from a hottie by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
21 Jul 2003, 7:55 PM
poop.
on The Muse by StuntHornist
21 Jul 2003, 7:59 PM
A double scoop of poop with cocca sprinkles.