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20 most recent comments by edpeterson (141-160) and replies

Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:42 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:37 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:36 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:36 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:34 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:33 AM
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Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:32 AM
~@rectal.emissions@~
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/10:23 AM
-=Rectal_Emissions=-
Re: A Spring bird in November (Edit) by Sasha 10-Nov-04/9:01 AM
i have to agree with Jimmy Z on this one, though I doubt i would have noticed myself, otherwise.

What you have is really good.
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/8:52 AM
I like how you followed "Dont leave me a fucking dimtard comment if that's the best education you've got..." with "I HAVE FOUND THOUGHTS AND WORDS TO BE THE FOUNDATION FOR SUCCESS AND FAILURE IN LIFE" A stroke of genius, to be sure
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/8:44 AM
sorry, I meant " ~=Rectal Emissions=~ "
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 10-Nov-04/8:43 AM
here is one for you to mentally exercise with. I HAVE FOUND THAT BOXER SHORTS ARE SUPERIOR TO COTTON BRIEFS DUE TO THEIR LESS BINDING NATURE. THAT AND THEY ALLOW FOR QUICKER DIFFUSION OF RECTAL EMISSIONS.
Re: Leftout by RION12 10-Nov-04/6:08 AM
"i'm a creep
and i'm a weirdo
what the hell am i doing here?
I don't belong here"


interesting the way you write "leftout" as one word.
radiohead circa 1990 something

unperfect. strangely, i think this may be better than imperfect.

you are just unwanted
Re: a comment on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman 10-Nov-04/6:04 AM
ignorant of what?
Re: "I post here cause I have a lot of readers" by Bachus 9-Nov-04/7:53 PM
Yikes...
Re: a comment on An Afternoon Walk by Dovina 9-Nov-04/7:35 PM
nothing is more dangerous than fucking dimtards spouting aphorisms of their own design. unless you happen to count the giant missiles being fired from -=Dark Angel=-'s massive rump.
Re: a comment on Dark Everlasting by Sean Allen 8-Nov-04/9:17 PM
why would you take it back if it were about suicide?
Re: Where I work by phauge 8-Nov-04/9:15 PM
freaking....this is wrong. either use "fucking" or some other word that stands on its own and is not some chilly euphemism for a real word.

though I don't suppose it really matters, as this is most likely written on a post-it note and destined for the trash anyway.
Re: Down by phauge 8-Nov-04/9:12 PM
now this i think is kinda funny and kinda good.

if only you had made the half rhyme of tuna and you a bit more obvious....still a 10
Re: In the office by phauge 8-Nov-04/9:09 PM
perhaps during the hours of boredom, you might read, or, I don't know, learn how to spell? Or, here is another idea...focus on whatever task you are performing, so as not to completely fuck it up.

what is gimmie?

If only you had rhymed something with 'drano', this would have been an automatic 10


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