Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer	23-Jun-04/4:03 PM
Get the hose Marge, them pasty Scotsmen done got in the trash again.
Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer	23-Jun-04/4:11 PM
How 'bout "skuldouggery".
Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer	24-Jun-04/12:35 PM
Not that am bothered by it, but I think all the profanity takes away from it.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jun-04/3:11 PM
nice story. Poets and preachers...quite possibly the most insane people on the planet. I see you didn't like my Army Limerick...com on..Sum Dum Fuk....that's funny...you know you laughed a little. ;0)
Re: The Sea (revised) by Dovina	24-Jun-04/4:00 PM
I'm glad you learned to like the sea. I'm going there next week and can't freakin' wait.
Re: Center Of The Universe by Dovina	24-Jun-04/4:03 PM
I like the thinking behind this but in liu of changing insect in the last line, I would change it in the line "If I crush an insect" to read If I crush a stinkbug or whatever. That would give the person reading something to visualize and, I think, drive your point home more clearly by stating "It was only an insect.
Re: Revision by Dovina	5-Jul-04/12:19 PM
I like this one. When the rules become too concrete, there is little room left for invention. Poetry dies, indeed.
Re: Translation by Dovina	5-Jul-04/12:27 PM
Yes, I like this one.
Re: Paradelle of Progress by Dovina	5-Jul-04/12:28 PM
I'm not sure about the form. I'll have to learn about it and will hold my vote until I do so.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-04/12:31 PM
super-duper.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-04/12:35 PM
When I was in Florida last week, this crab tried to pinch my toe. So I tried to kick it and missed. Then I fell down and busted my ass.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Jul-04/12:37 PM
got ya. so true.
Re: Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy	5-Jul-04/12:39 PM
naughty, naughty.
Re: A Piñon Limb by Dovina	8-Jul-04/9:06 AM
People are giving this a hard time, but I rather like it.
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Jul-04/12:03 PM
I talked to Jesus the other day. He's pissed because Leno just keeps on sucking. The poem..a little simplistic from you. I guess I'm just expecting more.
Re: no email, no world by Prince of Void	12-Jul-04/12:22 PM
Is this written in English?
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-04/10:31 AM
If the man wants to indent his shit, then who cares.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jul-04/10:35 AM
This is more along he lines of what I expect from you. I think the last one could be good with more work, though.
Re: Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222	14-Jul-04/11:32 AM
I was turned off by the length of this from someone I hav'nt read before, but now I'm glad I read it anyway. Some of them are better than other (particularly, I think, Zin, Enough and Squeeze) but overall, very good. I'm impressed.
Re: Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222	14-Jul-04/11:35 AM
I think I would like this better if I had read it before the Zin/ poem. Maybe you set the bar too high and now I want it all to be that good. Still, not bad and better than most of what I've read today.