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14-Jul-04/11:38 AM |
Find some of that emotion from your first post and use it. I know now that you've got the talent, but you've got to at least try. I know, sometimes you just want to get something posted and you think...hey, I'll change it later..I do it too..but well..nevermind.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Jul-04/12:43 PM |
no understando espanoli. So no el voto.
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16-Jul-04/12:44 PM |
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Re: Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina |
17-Jul-04/3:15 PM |
Captured perfectly and beautifully.
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Re: Mr Blobby V skooby doo!! by MR Blobby |
17-Jul-04/3:16 PM |
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Re: I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17 |
18-Jul-04/7:33 PM |
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Re: Crazy with a Capital K by D. $ Fontera |
18-Jul-04/7:58 PM |
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Re: Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina |
20-Jul-04/12:30 PM |
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20-Jul-04/12:31 PM |
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20-Jul-04/12:38 PM |
Oh goody, he's Shuushin again. I guess my birthday wish did come true.
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Re: The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus |
28-Jul-04/10:09 AM |
Hmmm, something about this that I like, even though it doesn't make any sense to me.
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28-Jul-04/12:34 PM |
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31-Jul-04/4:02 PM |
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Re: Saturn by Bachus |
31-Jul-04/4:08 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-04/4:13 PM |
It's sad that the Democrats aren't even going to TRY to win this election.
It's even sadder that people are actually going to vote for Kerry, who (if it's possible) spouts more bullshit than Bush.
As for the (poem?) I'll give you a six simply for taking the time to put all this down.
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Re: Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina |
31-Jul-04/4:19 PM |
i.e. - "YOU CANNOT DO WITHOUT ME":
You can, it just hurts a little more.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-04/4:20 PM |
You should get a psychotic girlfriend and then every night will be an adventure.
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Re: Dead by QuirkyWonder |
31-Jul-04/7:04 PM |
I realize that things get bad, sometimes, but I truly cannot understand cutters. I understand the concept, but I just really don't get it. I encourage you to change your life if you're not happy with it. As far as the poem goes, it's not very good. I have read some things by you that show promise but this is not it.
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Re: The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx |
31-Jul-04/7:08 PM |
I think if I was walking through a graveyard and the dead people started talking to me, I would get my ass out of there. I've seen way too many scary movies to know that when dead shit starts talking, it's time to go. That, or maybe you just forgot to take your Risperdal this morning...I don't know.
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Re: You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom |
31-Jul-04/7:11 PM |
You can't kill dead man.
I am not afraid to die.
Just don't muss my hair.
Really not a Haiku, but I'll give you a 4 for effort.
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