on some deleted poem
14 Jul 2004, 11:38 AM
Find some of that emotion from your first post and use it. I know now that you've got the talent, but you've got to at least try. I know, sometimes you just want to get something posted and you think...hey, I'll change it later..I do it too..but well..nevermind.
on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2004, 12:43 PM
no understando espanoli. So no el voto.
on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2004, 12:44 PM
Happy Birthday DGB.
on Divorcing Tennessee by Dovina
17 Jul 2004, 3:15 PM
Captured perfectly and beautifully.
on Mr Blobby V skooby doo!! by MR Blobby
17 Jul 2004, 3:16 PM
bloody hell.
on I'll Make It Through by cuddlytiger17
18 Jul 2004, 7:33 PM
You're getting better.
on Crazy with a Capital K by D. $ Fontera
18 Jul 2004, 7:58 PM
nope. sorry.
on Poor Unwritten Rabbit by Dovina
20 Jul 2004, 12:30 PM
Silly rabbit.
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2004, 12:31 PM
bueno.
on some deleted poem
20 Jul 2004, 12:38 PM
Oh goody, he's Shuushin again. I guess my birthday wish did come true.
on The bad news is his bones are like rubber by Venus
28 Jul 2004, 10:09 AM
Hmmm, something about this that I like, even though it doesn't make any sense to me.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2004, 12:34 PM
Beautifully done, Ed.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 4:02 PM
That's pretty darn sad.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 4:13 PM
It's sad that the Democrats aren't even going to TRY to win this election.
It's even sadder that people are actually going to vote for Kerry, who (if it's possible) spouts more bullshit than Bush.
As for the (poem?) I'll give you a six simply for taking the time to put all this down.
It's even sadder that people are actually going to vote for Kerry, who (if it's possible) spouts more bullshit than Bush.
As for the (poem?) I'll give you a six simply for taking the time to put all this down.
on Peace that Passes Understanding by Dovina
31 Jul 2004, 4:19 PM
i.e. - "YOU CANNOT DO WITHOUT ME":
You can, it just hurts a little more.
You can, it just hurts a little more.
on some deleted poem
31 Jul 2004, 4:20 PM
You should get a psychotic girlfriend and then every night will be an adventure.
on Dead by QuirkyWonder
31 Jul 2004, 7:04 PM
I realize that things get bad, sometimes, but I truly cannot understand cutters. I understand the concept, but I just really don't get it. I encourage you to change your life if you're not happy with it. As far as the poem goes, it's not very good. I have read some things by you that show promise but this is not it.
on The wispears of the night by XxRuby_KillsXx
31 Jul 2004, 7:08 PM
I think if I was walking through a graveyard and the dead people started talking to me, I would get my ass out of there. I've seen way too many scary movies to know that when dead shit starts talking, it's time to go. That, or maybe you just forgot to take your Risperdal this morning...I don't know.
on You Can't Kill A Dead Man! by dougsoderstrom
31 Jul 2004, 7:11 PM
You can't kill dead man.
I am not afraid to die.
Just don't muss my hair.
Really not a Haiku, but I'll give you a 4 for effort.
I am not afraid to die.
Just don't muss my hair.
Really not a Haiku, but I'll give you a 4 for effort.