regarding some deleted poem...	23-Oct-02/1:14 PM
Christ did not retaliate, hockey is full of retaliation, christ would not have been a good hockey player. well, yeah, maybe christ was just a wuss!
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/7:41 AM
I am sure you sat up two straight night and two complete days trying to be clever on this one. Too bad, you failed. No wonder the Brits can no longer win their own prizes.
Re: HATE by Blade	4-Nov-02/7:42 AM
I am sure you can find another site out there to spew your crap. But, hey, thanks for ruining this one.
Re: I Love You, My Angel by mytenderrage	4-Nov-02/7:43 AM
I see the pimple poems are still alive and well in my absence.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/7:48 AM
Well, it is interesting to write a poem that only 100 people in the world understand. However, with a couple of changes it could be universal. Change the title. I think I say that to you a good deal. But I mean it with love.
Re: ITS A SHAMBLES by lukehanney	4-Nov-02/7:52 AM
Why direct voice? This is under 25 words and you use "wet" twice. Maybe you should pick another. Other than that, you might be on to something.
Re: Got Balls? by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/10:40 AM
Pointless. You obviously spend an excessive amount of time parked in front of the television watching reruns of pop idol. It shows in your thinking. Don't you have a new video game to buy and play with your worthless little friends that have saturated the site with their mindless boggle the past couple of weeks?
Re: untitled by bluwiz	4-Nov-02/10:42 AM
I guess you are on the right track as far a creating an image. Unfortunately, your age is showing here. But at least it is not a whiny pimple poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/10:57 AM
Ha. An English Gangsta hippin' and hoppin' the mean streets of London town. The ultimate oxymoron. Remove the oxy and you have what wrote this poem. If it was only irony.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/11:01 AM
You in a mere five sentences have given justification for the removal of free speech. Did your mommy take DES? Is that why your penis is so small?
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/11:19 AM
Hey Nicholas Jones. Are these friends of yours from that fucking Marxist club. Have you had your brain beaten in at too many hoodlum riots at soccer games? Read DeLillo, yet another superior American writer, to learn the power of the crowd and you will see it is all old hat and that putting a goofy web boinking virus as your home page does not make clever or even one that possesses the devices to write good poetry, which of course even on a sunny day in merry old England, you could not do. The soccer punch effect. Watching such a mindless and boring sport, what else must you do? Drink, shit, cuss the rival. Fight. It makes it all that much more interesting. But if you avoided the fisticuffs and stopped watching so much TV and wearing your mommy's under garments, you might find time to read a few books and develop those devices of writing and then no longer bore the fuck out of us with this shit.
Re: Ignoranus by Yardbird	4-Nov-02/11:26 AM
Christof? Hey Christof? What the fuck is happening over there in England. Has that lovely sense of irony spilled down one of those 10-gallon release toilets? There is a German that lives in Earl's Court, a mere block of the metro, down from the putrid Burger King. I forget the name of the street. He is a clever sort and obviously has stolen all you abilities of humor (yes, a German--that is how bad the situation has become). Please, see him. Save your country.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/9:23 PM
"I should say" seems awkward and would it work better if you dropped "my soul's"? But after having baby piss and shit all over the floor your sould could be in demise. Tell tha family hi, give the cats a pet.
Re: Youth Fair by daniella	4-Nov-02/9:27 PM
"When the sticky pink cotton dress Gets stuck between your thighs" -- Excellent visual and rhythmic line, but the last two lines do not match it and the poem loses me a bit. After you nail something like that, a major league line, I expect the whole poem to follow. But a nice draft all the same.
Re: The Washing by strider1	4-Nov-02/9:35 PM
"Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery." Eh. Did you get a boner letting my words flow around in your head and blood and while your fingers typed them out onto the screen. I bet you did, boy, I bet you did.
regarding some deleted poem...	4-Nov-02/9:36 PM
"I am suffocating Under the weight of a memory" good stuff. And I like small breasts!
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Nov-02/9:56 AM
What is this, white man's Ebonics? yo, yo, yo, a shout out to da peeps on da south side. we be chillin', ya be illin'. this is a stick up. and i da serious, don't pay no mind to my tough man low brow "I really want to be a hardcore Compton crypt" English accent. I'm cool. I'm white. I live in suburbia. I listen to Nelly. I'm down with the homies in East St. Louie. Go Rams!
Re: Fit for a King by dougsoderstrom	6-Nov-02/12:04 PM
The GOP rules, Doug!! Conform or die. Finally, we are going to take over Canada, except for Alberta, they jumped ship ages ago. Did you hear that Limondae, Razorgrin, Tint? I am giving you full warning because I care for your safety. We are lining tanks up as we speak, the predators are searching for targets we haven't already taken over with NAFTA. Baby Bush is having the name god changed to George in the bible. All new texts are due at the end of the month. But, first it is onwards to Canada. Doug, I think it time you come over to the right and see the error of your ways.
Re: advice for the heated by <~>	6-Nov-02/10:39 PM
Doesn't the fog offer protection? Oh, yes they are moving, or is it they? Maybe "I"? Hmmmm. Hey, what is a cyber back seat, you know, just in case I get lucky? Why "temp'rature"? Make sure to make sure it's not the stick shift!
Re: In the Valley of Two-Dollar Pints of Red Hook IPA by <~>	6-Nov-02/10:41 PM
Not a favorite. But you were pissed, so fair enough.