regarding some deleted poem...	14-Nov-02/1:41 PM
So what, the chainsaw is a metaphor for a strap on and the carp had to show you how to use it so when you switch to the other side you can have the dominant role?
regarding some deleted poem...	15-Nov-02/9:57 AM
What, someone gives you a 0 (it was one of the Brits, they did it to my new poem also) and you cannot hack it as a nonsensical vote and carry on? What did you change here, besides giving yourself a clean voting slate?
Re: Dynamic Duo by INTRANSIT	15-Nov-02/10:18 AM
Dear boy, you are the most paranoid, hypersensitive person I have ever not met. Do you know how many poems I have inspired here (I believe this one is #5). I am honored. But when I am asking you questions they are not loaded, so have a drink, settle down. I thought truckers were tough guys with a ton of hair on the chest. I shave all mine off, legs too, so see, I am really just a wuss. I just wanted to know if you preferred the tuck stop ice cream or the porn? 10-4 good buddy. Horus8 will not save you so maybe you should learn to say fuck you. Get out that poemranker rage. Please do not take it on the road. My favorite part of the poem is the mic feedback. Hey, geat stuff. Did the wife like it. Everytime I read my poems my wife leaves the room. Guess I will be losing yet another one. Oh well, keep on keepin' on, good buddy.
Re: Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles	19-Nov-02/7:46 AM
If you're going to flood the site with this crap, then please do not call it haiku. Maybe free verse, or how about "a random thought I woke up with this morning." Nentman, add that one to the list.
Re: Mistakes by wickedemon4	19-Nov-02/7:49 AM
Did you conjure this while skateboarding?
Re: I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon	19-Nov-02/4:06 PM
And Abba, coould you do something with the form of this poem, like break it up some, so it doesn't drag for a mile accross my screen.
Re: I Stand Mesmerized by abbaslittleclingon	19-Nov-02/4:07 PM
And Abba, what does L-G-O mean?
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/4:07 PM
I see you are not dead yet.
Re: Absence by newdawnfades	19-Nov-02/4:11 PM
Well, I suppose it is better than writing to feel dead. At least if you did that, this would be a better attempt. You know, Christof has a ton of poems about birds. Look him up. Plus, he has never had a mullet.
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Nov-02/4:13 PM
My poetry is better than your poetry!
Re: In the heart there is freedom by mozac	19-Nov-02/4:15 PM
Jesus, what is it with you people and birds? Have you been hanging out with the guy that writes ... poems? This sounds like a weak attempt at a corny motivational speech. And now for your entertainment pleasure we present: "Church sermons gone Bad."
Re: St. Germain & The Charismatically Uncomitted by <{Baba^Yaga}>	19-Nov-02/4:19 PM
GW is suffering from the Razorgrin to Shin complex and will give anything you write a ten. And while this is an interesting piece and quite funny at times, it is just that: at times.
Re: "Why would I need to get in touch with you?" by Limness	19-Nov-02/6:54 PM
Why do you have the //// in there? Why not. >>>> or <<<< or ^^^^^ or }}}} or [[[[ or |||||||? What to they add to this here poem? And when are you going to write another triangle? Should I post the response you should have said to him as a poem. Maybe titled: If Z was in here right mind this is what she should have said to the furnace fixer?
Re: Down Again by Birdman42s	19-Nov-02/7:18 PM
I. I. I. Me. Me. Me. Really this is nothing more than a statement without any images. One screwed up sentence of "Oh Woe, Woe is Me." Not a poem worth anything.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	19-Nov-02/7:21 PM
Have you no honor man; letting Settle anonymously rank your work so you can have the best and the worst. You should remove these at once or run and hide in shame. He has already stated his intentions and is going crazy with the blue line. A respectable man would do something about it.
Re: The Thought Of It by Christof	19-Nov-02/7:23 PM
Although this poem has a lost sense of place, it more than makes up for it in depth. Best poem on the site. Hands down.
Re: The Thought Of It by Christof	19-Nov-02/7:24 PM
And no birds!
Re: Kindling by <~>	19-Nov-02/7:28 PM
I would remove "spent"? I think the word "scraps" is a bit misleading, especially when implied with stove. The last stanza is excellent.
Re: When It's All Over by BUFFY0BSESSED	19-Nov-02/7:29 PM
Seriously now. This site is for real poems.
Re: Sisters in Disquise by confuzdlilgirl	19-Nov-02/7:35 PM
Now, I am really not sure that I know how to read poetry, especially poetry that is this bad, but I don't think you really understand friendship. I think you need to experience things before you actually write about them.