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Mistakes (Lyric) by wickedemon4
Every time I see you It brings me back to that day, When you told me how you felt And all I did was push you away. I wasn???t ready for it I didn???t know what to do, But now when I think about it I should have gone with you. Now I???m all alone And you are gone, But it???s kind of funny How life always makes you the pawn. You went on To bigger and better things, But I still hear your voice Every time a lovebird sings. I???m almost over what we had But I don???t know what to do, Because it still breaks my heart Every time I think about you. END

Up the ladder: Collectively Chilly
Down the ladder: I Lost My Way

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.75
Weighted score: 4.7317934
Overall Rank: 11749
Posted: November 18, 2002 9:51 PM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 9:51 PM PST
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.29 | 19-Nov-02/7:49 AM | Reply
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