| Re: Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum |
12-Dec-02/6:27 PM |
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| Re: Mum why are grandmas arms so baggy? by ==Doylum |
12-Dec-02/6:29 PM |
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I can see flying to bingo, but wisdom and retirement. That is stretching it. But then maybe you mean to the midlands or to the place where kitty went.
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| Re: A holiday warning by INTRANSIT |
15-Dec-02/6:23 PM |
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| Re: Icarus up by horus8 |
15-Dec-02/6:24 PM |
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This is fucking like visionary, man.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Dec-02/8:56 PM |
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Besides the clear fact that this poem is on the immature side why does it end with By: Shawn Aronson? I think you should come up with a better ending because this confuses the reader greatly.
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| Re: Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 |
16-Dec-02/11:28 PM |
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This is a true and visionary piece of work. You must submit this to the Paris Review at once. Just where Stan Rice has published. hahahahahahhahhaahhaha
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Dec-02/12:01 AM |
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This is by far not your best. But hey, that visionary H8 (my girl makes USD8 an hour, but I love her so) likes it, so be it. I shall not vote.
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| Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/12:06 AM |
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A work of visionary genius. You need to submit this at once, just to show us you are the POLLACK OF Poetry. HAHAHAHAHA. Stan Rice. Really. you suck as a writer. hahahahahahaha
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| Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/12:08 AM |
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But it is all of us that are missing the point. In 100 years this will be the pinnacle of art. haahahahhahaha
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| Re: Icarus Down by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/12:09 AM |
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More shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But genius!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Icarus Down by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/12:13 AM |
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Whoever gave this a 10 was in need of either a GED or just completely drunk. Have not we established that this fictional character cannot write.!!!!! It is not worthy of more than a zero. I would give it less, but I am limited see, by nentwhistle. We need minus #s.
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| Re: The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/1:05 AM |
Here is my attempt to track down your crappy poems and make a comment, which I have avoided at all costs in the past. Well, you have Intransit, who would give a pile of shit a 10 loving this and Athena, the plagiarist (or is it you) digging it, and Christof (the best poet on this site) well he was dazed and thinking of New Zealand, because it is shit. Just like all the other poem you write.
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| Re: Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8 |
17-Dec-02/2:06 AM |
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Really, 9/10. Who? Why? Seriously. this is shit. It will be shit in 100 years. Trust me.
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| Re: of people and places (final cut)I by INTRANSIT |
17-Dec-02/2:18 PM |
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Why the question. Figure it out yourself.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Dec-02/3:01 PM |
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This is a statement not a haiku. And it is McDonald's not Mac. And they just posted their first quarterly loss in the history of the universe. People must be going to Boston Chicken to get a load of H0's girlfriend.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Dec-02/3:11 PM |
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Jackson Browne already wrote this song with much better lyrics.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
17-Dec-02/6:29 PM |
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What is the point of this?
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| Re: flying home by daniella |
17-Dec-02/7:43 PM |
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| Re: Is It Love by angel_uy |
17-Dec-02/7:44 PM |
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I just read this, but it was called "Trust."
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| Re: Mind of War by t_t_redhot |
17-Dec-02/7:47 PM |
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I think you are trying to be deep here for your own good. This sounds like a good Stan Rice poem. But that just will not do. Maybe try to calm the images a bit.
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