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Is It Love (Free verse) by angel_uy
The love I have been searching for, I found after many. Will it last, how long? Unknown are the answers But will be learned in time. The end when it comes, Is not important. What I have now will last forever, Even if only as memories. A feeling of joy, That will stay in my heart. Let it not be lost on the one I love. Forever and always, A place in my heart he'll hold.

Up the ladder: Brothers and Sisters
Down the ladder: Longing

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Overall Rank: 13449
Posted: October 25, 2002 4:06 PM PDT; Last modified: October 25, 2002 4:06 PM PDT
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[0] Tintagiles @ 198.164.250.181 | 26-Oct-02/6:38 PM | Reply
Has anyone ever told you that all your poems sound the same?
[n/a] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.47.45 > Tintagiles | 26-Oct-02/11:46 PM | Reply
I think I might have but I'm not sure
[n/a] angel_uy @ 24.222.29.234 > Tintagiles | 27-Oct-02/11:29 AM | Reply
Well lets see, I only have 4 poems posted and hmmmm I have how many written, at least 50. So no, not all my poems sound the same, and for your information The three "love" poems are about the same guy so yes they are going to sound similar. You really need to learn how to give criticism constructively.
[0] Tintagiles @ 142.166.234.90 > angel_uy | 28-Oct-02/8:47 PM | Reply
Ridiculous. Their having the same subject is no excuse for their sounding quite so similar. If you can only speak of your love for this character in this one tone, I suggest your love is not particularly profound.

And bleeding hell, what is this obsession with constructive criticism??? Constructive criticism! Constructive criticism indeed! The hell with constructive criticism. I would like to thank you for making me notice that I really and truly detest that term, along with all it implies. WHY, might I ask, should I give constructive criticism? Hmm? Oh no, this is the modern age, and we're all very politically correct, and we musn't say nasty things, we might bruise these poor people's fragile little egos... who gives a flying monkey's mid-air fuck? If your egos can't take insults, tough, and good luck in the world. The hell with constructive criticism. I have no interest in your poetry, and all I ever mean to express is my personal opinion on the poem. Why should I help you to make it better? If you cannot better it on your own, that is your own problem. Now, of course, you'll ask me if I don't prefer getting cosntrutive criticism rather than insults on my poems. The sort of criticism you want is always interesting, but then the insults are always funny -- sometimes in their inventiveness, sometimes in their mind-boggling idiocy. On this site in particular, the heckling is often better written than the poetry anyway.
[n/a] angel_uy @ 24.222.29.234 > Tintagiles | 30-Oct-02/5:28 AM | Reply
You're angry on the inside aren't you......
[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.212.126 | 17-Dec-02/7:44 PM | Reply
I just read this, but it was called "Trust."
[4] emeraldeyes @ 198.247.178.139 | 29-Dec-02/3:45 PM | Reply
thesuarus!!
[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 17-Apr-03/8:20 AM | Reply
This is basic in all aspects, lacking imagination and any interest value for the reader. In your work I have read thus far some of your lines are good, quite dreamlike, but as poems rather forgettable. Dust yourself down and keep bangin them out. 5
[5] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 17-Apr-03/8:21 AM | Reply
By the way I would say tintagiles is by far the best imagery poet on this site, you wanna listen to the geezer.
[n/a] angel_uy @ 142.87.160.89 > Caducus | 22-Apr-03/8:29 AM | Reply
oh i agree, i just like to argue with him.....
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