| Re: Loosed by <~> |
18-Oct-02/3:44 PM |
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its times like this i'm glad i was not unseated, otherwise i risk losing myself to falling over from a beautiful shock.
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| Re: more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
10-Oct-02/4:21 PM |
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brillant...this just proves that no matter where I go online anymore I'll be face to face with porn. :::sigh::: oh well, back to making my porn page.
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
4-Oct-02/2:06 PM |
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english, eh? may i make it more official by apologizing for dragging you all down with us americans? good, then its settled...
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| Re: The Good Old Days in New Orleans by cobalt |
27-Sep-02/2:09 PM |
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demented, which is my favorite flavor besides simple vanilla. like the british say, good show.
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| Re: Fraternity by Christof |
26-Sep-02/8:30 AM |
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even piss drunk at 11am i was able to understand this...i am now debating whether or not that is brilliance on my behalf or yours. we'll just stick with yours. excellent. time for more beer.
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| Re: a comment on Black Heart by brazen |
26-Sep-02/8:25 AM |
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ah...the most frequently forgotten art...the art of understanding. they say if you can reach just one person in the end it was all worth it. hmm, now i see the truth behind this former laughter phrase.
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| Re: a comment on I have no Idea?...? by brazen |
21-Sep-02/10:38 AM |
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| Re: Gone Away by Christof |
12-Sep-02/1:29 PM |
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if only it went counter-clockwise, then you'd be able to go back in time and change the past.
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| Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
12-Sep-02/1:05 PM |
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man, this makes me wish i had AIDS so i could laugh my pain away...or at least compare notes. Anywhosamabob, well thought out in your comical genuis...may the taboo never lose you.PS--has it been 23.2 years already?
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| Re: Milk & Honey with a touch of PCP <the dead cat edit> by horus8 |
11-Sep-02/10:39 AM |
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maybe its all the acid in forever encraved on the memorial to abstinence that now stands on my spine, but not only did i get to the end of this own personal illiad, but i didn't even pay the usual attention to the overwhelming length...usually i get up and make a sandwich halfway through...either way, i shall finish off with a very much child-like "i likey the stuff, mommy"
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| Re: a comment on A Memory of Something Yet to Come by brazen |
8-Sep-02/6:52 AM |
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eh, it happens...eh, it happens...anyway, thank you. the construction is supposed to be like an outline...each part i indented has something to do with the line above it...figured if i was writing about the 'big plan' of life, i might as well start out with an outline, just like my english teacher told me before i told this class sucks.
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| Re: the art of dreaming (screaming) by brazen |
3-Sep-02/10:18 PM |
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i hope this is more along the lines of what you were speaking of...i made a couple of my own changes to help...i think
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| Re: Black Heart by brazen |
3-Sep-02/9:54 PM |
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ok ok, point taken...the painting was a terrible analogy...the only point i was trying to make is the I AM A TERRIBLE EDITOR...when i write it either comes out the way i want it the first time or it stays the way it is...i have been working on it...most of my other postings are slight alterations of previous poems, i think in one i combined two poems i wrote about the same moment...and to horus, i was taking your previous editing suggestions seriously, just, even in writing, my sarcastic overtones seem overly present, even when i'm not being so.
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| Re: Black Heart by brazen |
3-Sep-02/10:14 AM |
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let me explain myself better, after i apologize for apparently coming off egotistical, but i do not find myself up on a higher plain than anyone else...lets compare...if i was a painter and i messed up a stroke, i wouldn't start a new painting from scratch, i'd just go with it and see what comes out...thats the way i write. when i put too much thought into things they get messed up, so i write and just let whatever comes out...as i've stated, this was the FIRST poem i ever tried to right, and i'm actually not too fond of it, but i really don't like to go back and fix it because of the emotion it portrays to me, as if i was pretending to be happy when i was sad...i have no idea if any of this made sense, but this is the long, more detailed explanation of my thoughts. now, we continue our tour...
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| Re: the art of dreaming (screaming) by brazen |
2-Sep-02/9:35 PM |
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alright, alright...even i, a stubborn man raised and true, will listen and subdue...i just need more patience and guidance...and do you want me to replace EVERY 'the' with 'no' and switch 'birth' with 'death'...i'll call up p. diddy and get with the remix
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| Re: Black Heart by brazen |
2-Sep-02/8:13 AM |
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| Re: Black Heart by brazen |
1-Sep-02/5:09 PM |
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i know its lacking, but i don't believe in changing or editing what i write after i've written them...and this was the first poem i ever wrote a little of 5 years ago...i think its good for a first timer
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| Re: All Around Me by brazen |
30-Aug-02/10:11 AM |
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a momentary lack of creativity plus my overwhelming sense of boredom makes for a dangerous and deadly bout of verbal moonshine.
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| Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit |
29-Aug-02/4:05 PM |
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| Re: Buried at Sea by brazen |
26-Aug-02/5:32 AM |
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yes, and thank you...i must remember to stop writing while trying to download porn. its too hard to focus.
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