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A Memory of Something Yet to Come (Free verse) by brazen
seems funny how life unfolds like a book past cannot be forgotten or even left behind it is written in stone there is no changing that future is still a blank rock awaiting scripture to carve it more is still to come next breath turns the page wonder how can one write their novel? or maybe just finish what is is that blank slate set to be? scripted for the actor play out your part or are the words a mere suggestion? unfinished sentences ad-lib the missing phrases define your construction in the end appreciated for what you were remembered by those you touched never done until the cover is closed before you're boxed, dropped collecting dust decay, fade from memory sits on the shelf with all the rest damnation, redemption a sequel to the plot do you start again?

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7240
Posted: September 7, 2002 9:11 AM PDT; Last modified: September 7, 2002 9:11 AM PDT
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[7] vulcan @ 80.242.3.119 | 7-Sep-02/11:51 AM | Reply
The towering metaphor was not very original but I like the construction.the end of it moving7
[7] vulcan @ 80.242.3.119 | 7-Sep-02/11:52 AM | Reply
The towering metaphor was not very original but I like the construction.the end of it moving7
[7] vulcan @ 80.242.3.119 | 7-Sep-02/11:55 AM | Reply
Sorry for the repetition.a mistake!
[n/a] brazen @ 12.90.47.229 > vulcan | 8-Sep-02/6:52 AM | Reply
eh, it happens...eh, it happens...anyway, thank you. the construction is supposed to be like an outline...each part i indented has something to do with the line above it...figured if i was writing about the 'big plan' of life, i might as well start out with an outline, just like my english teacher told me before i told this class sucks.
[7] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 10-Sep-02/7:31 AM | Reply
Theidea of being just a sequel is very depressing
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