Re: Evacuation harnessed angel Vs. The antichrist by Bachus |
20-Jan-04/6:58 PM |
ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, thats ego-check, asile -=Dark_ Angel=-, keep writing man
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Re: Anti-Rhymer [translation included] by Y2kSlamPoet |
20-Jan-04/7:04 PM |
a rebel in a wheelchair, thats awesome dude
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Re: Satan wants me for a scarecrow by bondjedi |
20-Jan-04/7:06 PM |
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Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
20-Jan-04/7:11 PM |
it's a pretty good, random poem, and it's funnier than hell reading what all the anti-poetic jack-asses (horus, poetandknowit, dark angel, lastobelus ) who can't write say about your stuff
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Re: Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay |
20-Jan-04/7:20 PM |
no angel is better than a light angel, my quasi-yoda friend...please don't take that as a bad thing, never stop writing, cuz i like reading what people say about poetry they don't understand, 'tis quite funny, I give you an 8
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Re: Make Love to Me by drumrgirl30 |
25-Jan-04/5:37 PM |
I LOVE it, I'm only giving you a 9 cuz I wish I wrote it
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regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Jan-04/5:41 PM |
it's s good poem, but too much of a mainstream-teen kinda thing...you also don't don't have confidence in any of your poems, which is kinda sad
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regarding some deleted poem... |
27-Jan-04/6:25 PM |
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27-Jan-04/6:27 PM |
Man, your poetry is so awesome, i just wish i could steal it, but that would be...stealing and thats bad, so i'll just worship it from here
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Re: "Good Bye" by Blindpoetry |
27-Jan-04/6:31 PM |
Sorry, but I can't criticize this, i think it's really good
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regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jan-04/3:13 PM |
My computer doesn't have spell-check
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regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jan-04/3:15 PM |
Poetry doesn't need punctuation, peotry has no rules, so how can you say she broke the non-existant rules of poetry?
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29-Jan-04/5:56 PM |
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Re: What Was An Attempt Is Now Gone by Blindpoetry |
29-Jan-04/6:27 PM |
You did what i can't do, write a good hate poem without rhyming *clap clap*
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Re: HALF by imperfect_creation |
29-Jan-04/6:31 PM |
nothings imperfect about this to me
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Re: ODE TO NICHOLAS JONES III by lukehanney |
31-Jan-04/5:32 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jan-04/5:34 PM |
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Re: Eaters of Life by Freddy |
31-Jan-04/5:34 PM |
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regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jan-04/5:41 PM |
Most of my poems are about the same girl, and have the same message, so I can realte...good job on 'blood never lets'
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Re: Poem with a twist by LosT SykoPath |
23-Apr-04/11:42 AM |
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