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Eaters of Life (Free verse) by Freddy Here we are eaters of life
dangling from our strings
hanging from a clock like a pendulum ball
how long until life eats us
Up the ladder:
Your love
Down the ladder:
Our Love Was Meant to Be
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Posted: December 5, 2002 2:12 AM PST; Last modified: December 5, 2002 2:12 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.6821256 Overall Rank: 12112 Comments:
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5-Dec-02/4:45 AM
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A pretender to the crown of Freddy I see. Hmmm, I did not realise what I am up against. The record shall have to be set straight.
well, it isn't bad
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