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Your love (Free verse) by highpoet23
I look into the darkness of my fear my fear of losing you Without light filled with fright I walk on Without knowing what is to lie ahead at times my shoes feel like they are filled with lead Memories of the past, in my head, motivate me to keep walking Now after all this walking I have to choose where to go do I take the bright lighted path so bright it blinds your judgment or should I trust my instinct and follow on threw the darkness. Although the darkness is now lighted with your love... Your love light gleaming from around the world is what is seen in my eyes and is what brightens up my path and your voice, harks of melodious singing, is what drives me to get to the end of path. My soul all this time has been misguided...under the influence of strangers reactions... Now I can say I am finally going in the right direction all because you told me you loved me.

Up the ladder: Parents
Down the ladder: Eaters of Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.3333333
Weighted score: 4.6821256
Overall Rank: 12106
Posted: December 2, 2002 8:46 PM PST; Last modified: December 2, 2002 8:46 PM PST
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