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Free verse № 28267

Your love

Member since 2002 · Posted 2 Dec 2002 · 0 comments

I look into the darkness of my fear my fear of losing you Without light filled with fright I walk on Without knowing what is to lie ahead at times my shoes feel like they are filled with lead Memories of the past, in my head, motivate me to keep walking Now after all this walking I have to choose where to go do I take the bright lighted path so bright it blinds your judgment or should I trust my instinct and follow on threw the darkness. Although the darkness is now lighted with your love... Your love light gleaming from around the world is what is seen in my eyes and is what brightens up my path and your voice, harks of melodious singing, is what drives me to get to the end of path. My soul all this time has been misguided...under the influence of strangers reactions... Now I can say I am finally going in the right direction all because you told me you loved me.

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