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HALF (Pimple) by imperfect_creation
(no re-writing alowed!) fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck this must be it. i'm ready to flip. changing direction to diffrent intentional infections... oh, did i forget to mention i don't care right now. i'm not here right now. something eles is running my mind. fuck you all. spitting out shit with my lips of wit (what) with your lips so wet i'll let myself do this thing we will both regret. how much sence can half a man make. half a mistake. half awake. half ready to break your heart. half ready to heal and start to figure out wich half of me is acually real. HALF OF ME CAN'T FEEL !nairb uoy kcuf you suck...uoy etah i

Up the ladder: moving away
Down the ladder: Prayer 2M

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5591
Posted: January 16, 2004 12:50 AM PST; Last modified: January 16, 2004 12:50 AM PST
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[6] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 16-Jan-04/6:37 AM | Reply
the backwards letters are pointless. fix the spelling.
[10] penguin fiend @ 216.207.134.87 | 29-Jan-04/6:31 PM | Reply
nothings imperfect about this to me
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