Re: a comment on Living Conditions by Christof	28-Oct-02/7:38 AM
Alright then please tell me what's a good colloquialism for 'fucking someone's mouth'. I don't know of one, perhaps you do. I f you don't either than please make one up. Thank you in advance.
Re: True Love by darkhelmet10	26-Oct-02/9:42 PM
you make this sound like a Margaret Mead account of aboriginal courting. Were's the love darling? Paradise indeed. Don't forget to were your seatbelt. Do you read poetry? If so, please tell me who.
Re: Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10	26-Oct-02/9:37 PM
First of all I'd like to say congradulations on falling in love for the first time. Your poem is young, considering the source it would be unusual if it weren't. The first rule you need to learn is, Don't tell me, show me. In other words, describe describe describe. To tell or depict. Were where you when you were scared. Lonely. HOW did she help. Literally. Don't make things up tell the truth in nauseating detail. Then you can learn how to transform it into poetry. Your poem is all skeleton. No flesh.
Re: still, i am her by daniella	26-Oct-02/9:27 PM
I don't know exactly what your talking about, but I know I like the way you say it. ' A mother is but one' that was the vision I had when I found out I was to be one. Difficult to write about. 'Did not ever prove it through" only works because I know what you're trying to say, but there has to be a better way to say it. The nine men are obscure enought o make me ignore them and move to the next idea. Planks? Suddenly I'm onboard and lost. Try again please. I want this clearer, if you can.
Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined	25-Oct-02/2:46 PM
I kinda get it.
Re: a comment on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl	25-Oct-02/2:34 PM
Funny, I said that exactly when I was 7 and in catechism, I mean cataclysm, no ... catachresis. Whateverrrrr! The nuns scolded me and made me eat chalk. Didn't know I was channelling Mrs. Russell. Thanks for the info. I'll consult Capt. Howdy.
Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	25-Oct-02/2:25 PM
Off with your head! Cheap tramp, rhyming love with above, is crime in these here parts. Get out of town Foxy Brown. "The lucky ones...' deserves better then that stalest of intros. Go away and come back when your ready. On your marks. Get set...
Re: a comment on The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus	25-Oct-02/2:19 PM
Cheers Big Ears.
Re: a comment on Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/2:14 PM
What's beautiful about being forced? Trying to make you see the errors of your ways? Give me a break, you are never wrong, we both know that. I was merely playing Abbott to your Costello. Jews on Second? The henchmen have been sent. Tell Rocco I said the checks in the mail. Why can't I bugger someones mouth?
Re: a comment on Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/12:38 PM
Hmmm, well it's obvious noones forced their cock inside you. Rape is natural, I'll agree, but so is murder and theft. Some people fantasize about being raped, but the real thing is no fun. Just tell me were you live and I'll send over one of my henchmen, and then you can experience it first hand, or if you'd rather I'll send over two. One can fuck you in the ass while the other buggers your mouth. Would you like that? I bet you would.
Re: Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/7:38 AM
I love he ending it makes this poem meaningful. 'Blind slope' also wonderful.
Re: a comment on Living Conditions by Christof	25-Oct-02/7:36 AM
Well considered 28% of women, and that's just women, surveyed in the States have been raped. It wouldn't be that far fetched. If he has any kind of clout, this is usually how it happens. One women gets up the nerve to tell and then all the other victims step forward. Not only is there the possibility of a program being hosted by a rapist, but hte fact is you work and eat and drink pints with them. Rape is not talked about enough. If you asked and got sincere answers you'd be shocked at the number of women you know who have been sexually abused. Boys too
Re: The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus	24-Oct-02/11:00 PM
Fate is a relic. Why do I keep having to repeat myself? I wish I was a monkey with loads of lice you could pick off my head. Then I'd suck your cock and we'd both be happy. La de da. When's the blond lady coming with the chow and the vitamin tabs? I want them to dress mee up in a sequins dress and a fright wig. You can wear a trench-coat and a fedora. We'll rollerskate around the stage and everyone will get their money's worth.
Re: a comment on Shackles of Reality by rick	24-Oct-02/8:40 PM
I think what I meant was, I once felt the same. So relative to me you are young. Death of course is the only fate we know for certain, but I don't think that's the debt you speak of.
Re: Free by muffin	24-Oct-02/8:17 PM
"Her translation is in her eyes" the rest must go.
Re: Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl	24-Oct-02/8:14 PM
Eureka it seems I have found the center of the universe. Pre-schoolers believe God revolves around them.
Re: Fields of Deception by rick	24-Oct-02/8:10 PM
The last stanza is too obscure. So is everything else. I think I know what your talking about only because you're so vague you could be talking about a lot of things. Including my own personal belief. You sound of restraint, not hollow, but not hallowed. Make sense?
Re: a comment on Shackles of Reality by rick	24-Oct-02/7:55 PM
You must come from a long, long line, and by that I mean a romantic flaw. Relative yes. A son perhaps, left at the doorstep. Cathedral or E.R., it's all the same. Emergencies.
Re: Shackles of Reality by rick	24-Oct-02/5:35 PM
Well rick, 4 0's thus far. What you're saying is not news, nor how you go about saying it, novel. In fact, your philosophy is out-of-date and no longer true. Didn't you see Titanic? Mr Cameron's heroes learn their lesson's just for you. There is no reality. Nothing is motionless. The future does not exist. this poem is a relic from a time when humans believed in fate. You must be very young.
Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford	23-Oct-02/8:18 AM
Alright who is Unity?