| Re: arise by daniella |
4-Nov-02/2:35 PM |
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i love the last stanza, a familiar melancholia. You reminded me of something long forgotten, I will go and post it now.
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| Re: fading by PunchMeInTheFace |
4-Nov-02/2:25 PM |
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I don't understand the title. Nothing here seems to be fading. Read your other 2, and I get the feeling your not jumping in. Just wandering around the perimeter. This is the strongest and most invested of the 3. I especially can relate to the last 2 lines, but somehow the last line feels overly dramatic in a cheesy sort of way.
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| Re: Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus |
30-Oct-02/8:40 AM |
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| Re: In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones |
30-Oct-02/8:36 AM |
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| Re: Consider The Dead by Bonehiss |
30-Oct-02/8:34 AM |
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I don't dislike this poem, but it get's very cliche.
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:21 AM |
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Well now I'm definitely not excited. You've burst my fantasy bubble. And anyway, if you all were so scintillating then we'd never get down to business. I like a pretty lout every once in a while. They've no need for talk.
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:13 AM |
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You've got lots of brothers. Now why does that excite me?
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:12 AM |
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You must be getting your period.
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:06 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:05 AM |
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Now that's a funny story. I've been visually your brother as robust and healthy. I hope he's well.
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/8:04 AM |
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Terrific, but why do you add all that sweet stuff to it?
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| Re: a comment on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/7:59 AM |
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Prententiously expensive you mean. Along with the barleywine. My boyfriend made beer 4 years ago. Best beer I ever tasted. I think I'll try my hand at it.
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| Re: Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar |
30-Oct-02/7:54 AM |
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I thought this poem was about "On the waterfront". Works for me.
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| Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
30-Oct-02/7:37 AM |
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Oh come on, it made you laugh, didn't it? Just a little?
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| Re: morning by kiki |
29-Oct-02/11:35 PM |
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| Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
29-Oct-02/11:29 PM |
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Oh baby, I'd like to simulate your computer. Bring Occam along. We can use his razor to shave each others eyebrows.
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| Re: a comment on boy girl by little_angel_maria |
29-Oct-02/3:42 PM |
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Black as the blackest heart.
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| Re: A love of the midlands by ==Doylum |
29-Oct-02/3:27 PM |
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Good God ==Doylum, are you ok?! Stand too close to the metro? I heard if someone has wings only on their right side it means they're gay. Is that true, or just a celestial legend? Must be a legend. I mean you don't have any parts right? But wait you told me you used to frabble to the tunes of Ms. Amos. What's going on? You have some explaining to do. Those wings are phony aren't they. Wing implants, humpf. When are you lads going to learn to love yourselves for who you are? You make baby Jesus cry.
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| Re: A Story Book Tale by brazen |
28-Oct-02/8:02 AM |
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What are you talking about? Love always lies, well it manipulates things anyway.
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| Re: a comment on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl |
28-Oct-02/7:55 AM |
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Captain Howdy is the titled used, by the demon in The Exorcist, to talk with Linda Blair throught the ouija board. He lives in the attic.
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