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Free verse № 22733

A Story Book Tale

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Oct 2002 · 3 comments

If I told you a story, Would you hold it true, Believe every word, And disspell the demons too, Because love never lies, Until it dies, And the story book is put away. Skipped a chapter, Now I'm lost without it, Went back to start again, But was told it is out of print, So find me the author, To summarize it forever more, 451 degrees of fate. Lost my marker, Forgot the page, Don't even remember, This book caused me rage, But I'm lost without the plot, Doesn't matter if I forgot, As long as I read the end.

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[2] god'swife 28-Oct-02/8:02 AM Reply
What are you talking about? Love always lies, well it manipulates things anyway.
[n/a] brazen › god'swife 28-Oct-02/2:08 PM Reply
correct, manipulation is hardly a lie...it is presenting an opinion drafted from your own brain for the sole purpose of trying to make someone give/get you what you want without asking for it directly...lies are just wrong, so very very wrong. in all though, you are very correct in your statement about love. its quite sad actually for that to be true.
[7] cobalt 1-Jan-03/10:22 PM Reply
hey, why not write your own ending?