Re: a comment on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum	29-Dec-02/10:16 AM
My sweet -="Darkie"=-, They told me you were dead! You're not dead, you're not dead! I'm so happy now, I will thank Jesus for this blessing.
Re: me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar	29-Dec-02/10:10 AM
After reading this I begin to imagine you are decieving me. Maybe you are someone else, pulling my leg. "Were the sun does not shine" means up your ass were I come from.
Re: what I saw at work today by Bill Z Bub	29-Dec-02/12:25 AM
Did you throw him in the can and close the lid?
Re: corners by rockinindividual	27-Dec-02/9:59 PM
I read this last, you make reading these easy and enjoyable. There are some small things that might do better if they were changed, But the telling, the telling is almost flawless. I like your poems.
Re: Truth at last by w~* ATHENA *~w	26-Dec-02/2:36 AM
Get some sleep.
Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/7:37 PM
I'm not dependent on anything. No I suppose it's not brain surgery, but I personally have trouble with the image because for me time already is just an illusion, a trick.
Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/7:25 PM
Good. I'm glad to see you posting. Does tricked time stand for daylight savings?
Re: a comment on Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w	23-Dec-02/7:12 PM
Please enlighten me as to way this is a reply to my comment. Is this poem plagiarised? What friend of Horus8? I'm completely in the dark on this one.
Re: The Coming Light by poetandknowit	23-Dec-02/7:03 PM
Did you just write this after our conversation? I remember 'tricked light' from some other poem, was it yours?
Re: a comment on Sickness by blkarak	23-Dec-02/8:39 AM
"self-seeking" would do better there or just "sychophant". It just seems in conflict with the rest of the poems style. Anyway if your happy with it then so be it.
Re: Sickness by blkarak	23-Dec-02/8:09 AM
Waht a strange poem. "In your face" is oddly out of place. Your point is clear but the prose doesn't flow at all. If your serious about this poem you need to re-write it. I am especially fond of lines 10-24.
Re: a comment on Laughing all the way to the playground by w~* ATHENA *~w	23-Dec-02/7:50 AM
No wonder the title had nothing to do with the poem!
Re: can't go back by brazen	23-Dec-02/2:18 AM
Que pendejada.
Re: Laughing all the way to the playground by w~* ATHENA *~w	23-Dec-02/2:10 AM
Hijole this is a piece of shit! Mainly because there are some terrific ideas forsaken by pompous look-at me-I'm-an-originalisms. You have made your thingy here completely in-accessible, congradulations. Too bad you can't use your abilities for making even the slightest sense. Try, it not all that uncool.
Re: a comment on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss	22-Dec-02/1:17 PM
I was rong your text is not juvenile. It intertwines religion and science, and I find flaw in that simply because it breaks tradition. Usuaslly religious text is vague so it can cover universal sins, scientific and otherwise.
Re: Legend by ThoughtfulSoul	22-Dec-02/12:49 PM
Once again a universal theme thwarted by lack of story. How did you stubble upon these revalations? that's what you need to be writing down. How you feel or what philosophy you have developed is only the theme, which because we all share these insights is a very boring read. Give me the account of what happened, I was not there, and so am interested in your experience. I am not interested in you telling me how you feel, but what caused you to feel. What dream? I want to know your dream, not your evaluation of it
Re: a comment on The Sons and Daughters of the New Light by Bonehiss	22-Dec-02/11:46 AM
Why is Gaia mentioned? This sounds like a One God cult(your unceasing reference to the "Light"). You need to read some Quaker philosophy. They named their cult Friends of the Light, or simply Friends. Quaker's a nickname given by outsiders. Read some George Fox, it will help. Your text is too juvenile for your subject matter. You need to do more research. Read Isiah, all of it really but start with Chapter 9, Luke and John. Psalms 4, 19, 119 and 130. I'll post a poem called Raven+ which I wrote 7 yrs ago about my experience. It's not a very good poem but it might inspire some train of thought for you. Good luck, sounds like a huge endeavor.
Re: Splendid Discovery by blkarakagain	22-Dec-02/11:22 AM
This is dreadfully over the top. What ever beauty may be here is lost among the gawdy weeds. "More vibrant than the cascadings hues of dementia"?! What the...? Vibrant dementia? Cascading dementia? Hues of dementia? At this point it seems you just love to hear yourself talk. "Unchecked by the plague of human frailty"? Unchecked by sense you mean. And it's not even finished you have accomplished saying abosulety nothing in more words then I thought possible. I met a girl she was beuatiful, we slept together and I got scared. I ran away I hope she comes to me because I don't have the balls to go back to her. Spit it out already, it seems to have poisoned you.
Re: The Dance by Quarton	20-Dec-02/9:18 AM
Too thick a slice of cosmic pie.
Re: DESERVING NOTHING MORE THAN LONLYNESS by LETO	20-Dec-02/9:11 AM
Fixing the grammer and the typos would be like giving Quasimoto hearing-aids. He'd be better off, but still very very ugly.