Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:13 PM
thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
Re: Evening by unknown	21-Aug-02/11:18 PM
do you read poetry?
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Aug-02/11:34 PM
18 10's wow there is no sauce like hunger! This poem is awful. How much of what? you never explain what this is about? Ghosts and demons flying loose on wings of siren's what's the emotion behind this! Sirens are mermaids are they not? Anyway regardless even if they had wings why would anyones bugaboos hang out there? this is so frustrating. Take a writting course 0/10
Re: You by Butterflies	21-Aug-02/11:39 PM
Well here's a whole lot of nothing to say.
Re: High? Coo... by Modulo	21-Aug-02/11:43 PM
Good 7/10 the title is bizarre
Re: Adolescence by PoeticDelicacy	21-Aug-02/11:44 PM
great topic badpoem
Re: Arts stare by Art Glocken	21-Aug-02/11:46 PM
yuck 0
Re: Eahtatiene by 1Sapphire1	21-Aug-02/11:55 PM
your poem suffers from rhymningitis. The only thing to do is put it to sleep, before it kills again
Re: Gong by tiamat	22-Aug-02/12:04 AM
I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/9:20 AM
Yes i've heard her read, it's shocking, well to me anyhow, how deep and throaty she is. (Sounds like an old madam.)Yes I love her yes it's good to make contact with someone who loves her yes I wish she hadn't done that but yes this is a hell of a world to be in. WHAT DID YOU THINK OF THE POEM??? if you don't mind.
Re: Butcher by Christof	22-Aug-02/9:25 AM
May I print this and hang it up in my kitchen? It's has such prettiness to it. Hair giving grip, fat giving way, knife's low wit. I wish I knew how to write. No matter gentlemen like you make it a pleaser just to read 10/10
Re: Butcher by Christof	22-Aug-02/9:26 AM
that's pleasure, not pleaser. I'm the pleaser, well half the time.
Re: domination by midnight	22-Aug-02/9:28 AM
great thoughts. really. Lot's of potentional. now write a poem about it. See Christof or babbitt for examples
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/9:31 AM
first of I can't tell if your taliking about a special guys scrotum or what. So this is hard to evaluate. If you want this thing to be taken seriously I suggest you stick to one motif. Cherries and starfish, is that sexual?
Re: Various 7-Eleven hold ups... by Bachus	22-Aug-02/9:35 AM
This haiku thing is perfect for you. Your so brilliant that limiting you verbage helps us nincumpoops to comprehend your genius a little better. You know cause otherwise it's like starring into the sun 10/10
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/9:47 AM
Sex organs are classified as either male or female or both. that's how it's done you idiots. I happen to have a degree in guess what? sexuality. It's what i do professionally (and as a hobby). I'm serious it's what I talk about all day long. Any questions? My dog are you folks un-informed. i mean this is basic you boy me girl why? because you have a penis and testicles and I have a vagina, uterus, and clitoris etc., when the coroner cuts you open and takes a look at your insides he will speak into the tape-recorder and say; reproductive organs female and/or male.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/9:54 AM
Monsieur Bojangles, It does not matter how many nerdlings love Mr Tolkiens trilogy. It is still ubscure and inless you read it at a star trek convention most will not understand. I do believe in elves though.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/10:00 AM
I gave you a 5 because that philosophy is what all great literature is based on, but your not suppose to come right out and say it. This is more of a motivational speech then anything poetic. were's the poetry damn it all to hell!
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Aug-02/10:20 AM
ooooohhhhh! you know I counsel adolescents right here were i live who are doing the same thing. Maybe you should give more of a clue in your title. Plus our cherries don't dangle.
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	22-Aug-02/10:46 AM
you are a bright boy. You've got it almost right, and since we don't talk about sexuality openly in our culture you get extra special praise for even attempting to understand. Here goes. Our gender is determined at the time of our birth by our sex organs. the dr. looks down and says this kids got a willy he's a he. But occasionally mistake are made. Their is our orientation which is either hetero, homo, or bi. There is our identity which lies on a continuum between male and female. For example I may have male sex organs but identify with females and consider my self as such. Or vice versa. Androgenous people identify with both groups and are the happiest. There is also a genetic identity XX girl XY boy. Verey rarely there are males who have XX chromosones but only there genetic specialist knows their little secret you would not be able to tell either upclose our at a distance. Elves are another story. I know thy are as a rule adrogenous at least the tolkien kind, but I've never seen their plumbing.