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Gong (Free verse) by tiamat Let it be known.
Let it be known.
Let the children understand the end of innocence.
Let the garden run wild, summer is not coming.
Let me watch from the tower, they draw near.
Let us watch from the tower, time is leaking away.
Let it be known.
Let it be known.
Let it be heard, but the gong wakes none.
The moon has no tears to cry, for her fallen brother.
Up the ladder:
Virtue and Sin
Down the ladder:
Seen from a train
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Posted: June 2, 2002 11:33 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2002 11:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.337412 Overall Rank: 3438 Comments:
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god'swife @ 209.179.134.216
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22-Aug-02/12:04 AM
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I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10
excellent
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