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Gong (Free verse) by tiamat
Let it be known. Let it be known. Let the children understand the end of innocence. Let the garden run wild, summer is not coming. Let me watch from the tower, they draw near. Let us watch from the tower, time is leaking away. Let it be known. Let it be known. Let it be heard, but the gong wakes none. The moon has no tears to cry, for her fallen brother.

Up the ladder: Matthew's Bastard
Down the ladder: Seen from a train

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.4615383
Weighted score: 5.337412
Overall Rank: 3438
Posted: June 2, 2002 11:33 AM PDT; Last modified: June 2, 2002 11:33 AM PDT
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[8] god'swife @ 209.179.134.216 | 22-Aug-02/12:04 AM | Reply
I'm sure i don't understand this but i like it just the same 8/10
[10] dancin_n_da_moonlite @ 205.188.116.135 | 15-Jan-05/7:24 PM | Reply
excellent
-mega
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