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Evening (Free verse) by Tchur
Blackberry wine resting in gold glasses
Silent candles all in a row
Red walls turned black in the night
Warm touch of human bodies
Hands resting in open palms
Fingers weaving together
Love-light kisses on cheeks and lips
Hair stroked and brushed away
Faces close on down-deep pillows
Arms encircling, clinging
Breaths' perfume mixed together
Deep silences in deep eyes
Teeth printing petals on white throats
Soft moans of loving pleasure
Arms clutching closer yet
Lips meeting and tongues dancing
Silence rescuing desire
Closeness lost in different worlds
Departure in cold blue morn.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11291
Posted: August 21, 2002 8:45 PM PDT; Last modified: August 21, 2002 8:45 PM PDT
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