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Evening (Free verse) by Tchur

Blackberry wine resting in gold glasses Silent candles all in a row Red walls turned black in the night Warm touch of human bodies Hands resting in open palms Fingers weaving together Love-light kisses on cheeks and lips Hair stroked and brushed away Faces close on down-deep pillows Arms encircling, clinging Breaths' perfume mixed together Deep silences in deep eyes Teeth printing petals on white throats Soft moans of loving pleasure Arms clutching closer yet Lips meeting and tongues dancing Silence rescuing desire Closeness lost in different worlds Departure in cold blue morn.

==Doylum 23-Aug-02/8:46 PM
yes let that be toadys lesson. Tommorows lesson shall be how to get angry at those who don't like you poems. The day after we shall concentrate on upseting little scrots, and the day after shall be spelling. I shall not be present on spelling day for i am ashamed to say i cannot and willn't spell correctly




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