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After The Rain (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512 One thing happens...
Right after another.
Over and over...
All they do is smother.
Are they trying to kill me?
Why would they want to?
I don't understand...
What did I do?
So many things...
And how confusing they are.
But they bring me closer...
To people from afar.
Eventually these things...
Will go away.
After the rain...
I can go out to play.
Up the ladder:
A little part
Down the ladder:
Evening
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Posted: August 14, 2002 6:28 PM PDT; Last modified: August 14, 2002 6:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7854347 Overall Rank: 11285 Comments:
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14-Aug-02/9:28 PM
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all that punctuation dampens the spirit, before the clouds even gather in the sky
Yes one thing does happen after the other. What a profound way of stating the obvious. And quit it with the...It is senseless.
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