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After The Rain (Free verse) by Lil_Chick_512

One thing happens... Right after another. Over and over... All they do is smother. Are they trying to kill me? Why would they want to? I don't understand... What did I do? So many things... And how confusing they are. But they bring me closer... To people from afar. Eventually these things... Will go away. After the rain... I can go out to play.

poetandknowit 15-Aug-02/2:01 PM
Yes one thing does happen after the other. What a profound way of stating the obvious. And quit it with the...It is senseless.




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