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Evening (Free verse) by Tchur

Blackberry wine resting in gold glasses Silent candles all in a row Red walls turned black in the night Warm touch of human bodies Hands resting in open palms Fingers weaving together Love-light kisses on cheeks and lips Hair stroked and brushed away Faces close on down-deep pillows Arms encircling, clinging Breaths' perfume mixed together Deep silences in deep eyes Teeth printing petals on white throats Soft moans of loving pleasure Arms clutching closer yet Lips meeting and tongues dancing Silence rescuing desire Closeness lost in different worlds Departure in cold blue morn.

Tchur 28-Aug-02/1:41 AM
Look, dammit, I suddenly realised snuff films would be funnier than normal porn, so I decided to change my comment. But since you had already responded, I needed to delete those two. My point wasn't to censor you but to make it make a bit more sense. Anyhow, the whole point behind that comment was the fact that god's wife's question seems ridiculous. I like, read and write poetry, certainly. If asking me whether I like reading it is some way of criticising, why don't you come out and criticise in a more obvious manner. Maybe I'm just obtuse. I mean, what's the point behind that question? That if I read poetry it would be better? That if I read poetry I'd realise I'm not in style (as if I actually cared)? That if I read poetry then I'd realise nobody else writes like that? Well, I'm very sorry, but others do write like that and if they didn't, then I think it would be a compliment to me as it woul dmake me original




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