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Arts stare

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Jul 2002 · 5 comments

Why do you look at me with your watery stare why do you look at me with flowers in your hair run to the watch tower run but dont hide run to the watchtower look out for a bees hive

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[10] johnnyfontaine23 27-Jul-02/8:40 AM Reply

I like this. It has a lot of elements to it. Water, Flowers, Bees, all very natural, which is what good poets use. This is a good first attempt, let down by a mysoginist tone.

[10] Nimrod's son 27-Jul-02/8:51 AM Reply

I like the pure simplicity of this poem - nice work. Although slightly dissapointed with the last line

[3] Mister Cakes 27-Jul-02/10:28 AM Reply

'Run to the watch tower'! NO. You run to the fucking watchtower you gimp.

[0] The troubled sinner 29-Jul-02/5:40 AM Reply

The work of My Glocken never fails to disappoint me. Such a talent - wasted. Reminisent of gazza.

[0] god'swife 21-Aug-02/11:46 PM Reply

yuck 0