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Sonnet Conceived While Standing (Lyric) by Blake
My dear, you question inspiration's spring As beaded sweat now shows upon my face I smile, for all creation's but a natural thing When beauty such as yours has rightful place. Gladly, I with striving vigor scribe this verse Despite struggling to upwards hold my head At last muscular release, the pen grows terse A sigh; Shall I soon see dearest effort dead? For exertions such as these are alone complete When no longer you are absent from my sight Else, invention's useless, toil, an empty feat Less affirmation is found in your light. If my pleas move you to emotion show All prior exercise tenfold would grow.

Up the ladder: Sonnet of a Child
Down the ladder: Arts stare

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7
Weighted score: 4.35
Overall Rank: 13055
Posted: July 10, 2002 4:41 PM PDT; Last modified: July 10, 2002 4:42 PM PDT
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[0] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.66 | 16-Aug-02/8:09 AM | Reply
A traditionalist poet, and at sixteen: how fucking cute! It is great you read the old dead farts, as they are most important. But these paltry imitations should be left to ones diary.
[5] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Aug-02/9:13 AM | Reply
With striving vigor I came inside.
But, alas a snore was her reply!
How dare your wench be so wide!
I rubbered my fist for one last try.
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