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Arts stare (Free verse) by Art Glocken

Why do you look at me with your watery stare why do you look at me with flowers in your hair run to the watch tower run but dont hide run to the watchtower look out for a bees hive

Nimrod's son 27-Jul-02/8:51 AM
I like the pure simplicity of this poem - nice work. Although slightly dissapointed with the last line




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