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Arts stare (Free verse) by Art Glocken

Why do you look at me with your watery stare why do you look at me with flowers in your hair run to the watch tower run but dont hide run to the watchtower look out for a bees hive

johnnyfontaine23 27-Jul-02/8:40 AM
I like this. It has a lot of elements to it. Water, Flowers, Bees, all very natural, which is what good poets use. This is a good first attempt, let down by a mysoginist tone.




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