| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/2:25 PM |
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hey you stupid little penis bearing bigots. My pussy would eat you alive, and then spit our your osteoporitic bones!
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| Re: Sexxodus by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/2:30 PM |
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blah blah boring blah. your head looks fat.
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| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/2:43 PM |
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D.A. d.a darkangel dumbass; androgynous pussies?! you're an idiot. As for being labeled I am not a feminist or any other kind of ist. I love testosterone! I just bel;ieve in the right to rebuttal
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| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/2:46 PM |
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to razorthin I am far from boring and i don't need to "lighten up" I have just the right height/weight ratio. penis bearer is not an insult, little penis bearer is. Maybe it's YOU who are taking my comments to seriously perhaps this is my evil attempt at humor.
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| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/2:49 PM |
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razorgirlie I am not, have not, and will not ever be a feminist. you are the reason why.
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| Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles |
21-Aug-02/6:03 PM |
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Mr Shin Bojangles your haiku is obscure enough to be unrecognizable. Sorry for using up your space to post my oppinions on the mis-use of the word pussy. So many of the postings seem to be tongue-in-cheek and humorously absurd I thought it would be fun to challenge some of the natives. Again, please forgive. As for you dark angel I am no ones alter ego. The use of the word pussy to discribe someone who is afeminite or cowardly is as absurd as using the word dick to discribe a jerk or an idiot. And yes Virginia the sex organs are MALE and/or FEMALE. Thank you for calling me a silly tart, that's a fun kinda girl to be. But I will have to beat you latter. Why is it that you and all your male comrades can get on board and rave their ravings, but when I do, everyone of you pussies gets your panties up in a scrunchy bunch? If I sing to cyndi lauper at a Karaoke bar wearing a velvet dress can I be a pussy too? Final thought.
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21-Aug-02/6:08 PM |
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I wrote these this am so I haven't had much time. I do plan on doing more of these if you have any helpful info or would like to post some of your own feel free
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21-Aug-02/7:10 PM |
Lenore the Bore,.....obviously some one of your caliber never has to stoop so low as to wipe her own buttocks, or even clean up a dish. I'm sure others do that for you. Do they erase your negtative press for you also? The relationship between Lenore's literary ineptitude is inversely poportionate to the suckfactor of her poems.
FORMULA: (LLI)/(SF*X)=1
You may apply this to anyone of her insipid ramblings. I would post a critique, but you are beyond the reach of any muse. Not to mention, you would edit the poem inorder to rid yourself of my spot-on observations. Ta Ta
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| Re: Path by Rlee |
21-Aug-02/7:18 PM |
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throw this away and start over. I sense you have something valuable to say, but it's lost amid the self-agrandizing word play. Stick to the idea you're trying to express. Less is mucho mas more.
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| Re: Missing you by kawakurdi |
21-Aug-02/7:20 PM |
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Terrific intil the last line. Feels like daddy was tellling you to hurry, turn off the lights and go to bed. This lovely poem deserves a stronger finish.
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21-Aug-02/7:37 PM |
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I second that. Great idea, so often our lives are more appreciated by outsiders then we can appreciate them ourselfs. Needs a hair cut though.
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21-Aug-02/7:51 PM |
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Sorry it should be (death and her kind)meaning death's relations. You know, the same news we hear every day. The other she is me.
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21-Aug-02/8:08 PM |
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21-Aug-02/8:22 PM |
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Glad you like. thanks for ranking
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21-Aug-02/8:56 PM |
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This poem is a blessing to me.
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21-Aug-02/8:58 PM |
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I'm beginning to see a transient's theme connecting these vignettes togther. Do the sleep under the same covers?
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| Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo |
21-Aug-02/11:11 PM |
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thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
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| Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo |
21-Aug-02/11:12 PM |
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thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
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| Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo |
21-Aug-02/11:12 PM |
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thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
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| Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo |
21-Aug-02/11:13 PM |
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thisisnot apoem thiIsNOT apo em. this is a foot straight up the ass of poetry.
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