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15-Aug-04/1:00 AM |
Not average... *5.1 or 4.9*
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Re: Society by QuirkyWonder |
15-Aug-04/1:02 AM |
Due to the odd typos and the fact the I'm about to pass out. *7.5*
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Re: Reality by Sirens_Voice |
15-Aug-04/1:04 AM |
Good idea... i myself like vagueness a lot. *8*
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Re: Creator of Filth by hobojo |
15-Aug-04/1:06 AM |
What is this about? Your sister's period? Whatever. *6*
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Re: Secret Love by ForgottenSoul17 |
15-Aug-04/1:07 AM |
Scratch the last line and it is quite decent. *7*
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Re: Hope in a Bottle by timtonio |
15-Aug-04/1:10 AM |
Good, except for the part about a lazy eye. *9*
P.S. Everything owned can be redeemed at you local Wal-mart for an item of equal or lesser value.
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Re: 30,000 and falling by That One |
15-Aug-04/1:12 AM |
Ah, remember those wacky days, when everthing went wrong? Yeah, good times. *9.83333333333*
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Re: Guess the place! by Patsy |
15-Aug-04/1:14 AM |
*10* Take the time to spell check.
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Re: interlude by Caducus |
15-Aug-04/1:15 AM |
Too choppy and distracting, possibly too long.
Now, the positives........... uhh, *7*
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Re: Peppermint by fevriere |
15-Aug-04/1:17 AM |
Fantabulactifying! I think. *10*
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Re: Fugitively Speaking by Dovina |
15-Aug-04/1:18 AM |
Like it a lot and that is that *9*
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Re: Broken for Completion by Chasz Misleading |
15-Aug-04/1:19 AM |
not too shabby, ok...maybe a bit shabby...but that's good. *8.5*
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15-Aug-04/1:21 AM |
Very, very well done. I'd applaud but..you know.
Take my word for it. *10*
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15-Aug-04/1:23 AM |
My range of emotion
*10*
*8*
*6*
*9*
*2*
*7*
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15-Aug-04/1:25 AM |
Absolutely wonderful put-you-in-your-place piece *9*
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15-Aug-04/1:28 AM |
Cigarettes kill, but those annoying bastards who go around telling people not to kill themselves is worse. If you feel like smoking your blackened lungs out, be my guest. Oh, *8*
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15-Aug-04/1:31 AM |
If you are being stabbed while this is being written, then I vote it as the greatest poem submitted to a peer-style internet poem voting community/chatroom ever! But since you probably aren't, (being stabbed that is) I shall remain disappointed. *7*
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Re: As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry |
15-Aug-04/1:33 AM |
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
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Re: As I wait to shoot a mallard, I consider life by somemorepoetry |
15-Aug-04/1:33 AM |
The Associated Press has declared this one of the best pieces that MacFrantic has ever read. Of course you suckered me in with the ellipsis... *10* Great title!
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Re: Outcome by Miggy |
15-Aug-04/1:38 AM |
I'll be honest...I didn't read it *6*
Now I'll be dishonest...Keanu Reeves is a prolific pioneer of well acted films, and he should refrain from having his vocal cords and face burned/lacerated by chemicals, prefferably in pill form, blue or red. (I love irony)
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