| Re: My Swarthy Bane by MacFrantic |
15-Aug-04/8:12 PM |
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thanks, this much I-------------------------------I
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10-Sep-04/6:02 AM |
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| Re: The Shocker (or "Where to put your fingers") by Tits |
27-Sep-04/8:50 PM |
Two in the shooter
One in the pooter
Two in the fruity
One in the booty
Two in the snatch
One in the hatch
Two in the thrill
One in the grill
Two in the parter
One in the farter
Two in the tunnel
One in the chunnel
Two in the sponge
One in the grunge
Two in the fish
One in the dish
Two in the naughty
One in the potty
Two if she swallows
One if she don't
Two in the bush
One in the tush
Two and a tongue
One just for fun
Two in the lap
One in the trap
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| Re: On the Discovery of Bacchus and Lovely Clothespins by MacFrantic |
7-Oct-04/1:26 PM |
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This is my one hundreth poem on the site! Under three pseudonyms of course! Keep on keepin' on.
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| Re: A Better God by Dovina |
21-Oct-04/10:00 PM |
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A very satisfying plan, if only it could be... *sigh* What the hell! I'm an atheist! *8*
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| Re: Cold Indifference by cuddlytiger17 |
21-Oct-04/10:02 PM |
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Quite "...", yes, quite. *9*
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| Re: You Were a Jerk to me in my Dream Last Night by T. Jonathron Remp |
17-Nov-04/6:28 PM |
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senseless and wonderful *7*
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5-Jan-05/10:01 PM |
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Very good weaved couplets. This type of poem is not exactly my cup of tea, but you pay attention to construction, which is always worthwile. *7*
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| Re: Cigarettes and Masturbation by Lifeboatman |
5-Jan-05/10:10 PM |
Apathy:
Lack of interest or concern, especially regarding matters of general importance or appeal; indifference.
Still a good poem, regardless. I still can't believe I took time to inspect your faulty contradiction by way of thesaurus. *8*
P.S.
Indifference:
apathy demonstrated by an absence of emotional reactions
P.P.S. I am a f**king loser.
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| Re: Bad-Ass Mudder-Fugger by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
17-Jan-05/11:09 AM |
put it under concrete and you've got a *9*
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| Re: Revaluations by Beyond_Dreams |
17-Jan-05/11:21 AM |
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Okay, I respect the subtle anger at humanity poem, but it seems that this one is missing a good point *6*.
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19-Jan-05/9:02 PM |
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you know...you know... *9*
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25-Jan-05/9:24 PM |
very good. *9*
Not in a very "descriptive review" sort of mood.
Sorrrrrrrrry. Jerks!
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| Re: Paris 1941-63 by Mister Cakes |
7-Feb-05/7:29 PM |
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it seems that you put about 2 seconds of thought into your poems. And that is not a compliment. *6*
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| Re: Provision by erin35 |
7-Feb-05/7:34 PM |
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| Re: Simple by wilco |
12-Feb-05/7:22 PM |
wonderful, absolutely wonderful!
almost a favorite. *10*
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
12-Feb-05/7:25 PM |
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hardly concrete, but I do enjoy the first stanza. *7*
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| Re: Dreamtigers (Borges) by Sasha |
12-Feb-05/7:29 PM |
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Only major problem- other than the whole "prose" thing-is the large space near the end. Find some way to fix it. *7* (I automatically deduct 1 point for prose, sorry)
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| Re: dot.com by PodPoet |
12-Feb-05/7:31 PM |
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3 dot.coms send the message. *4*
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| Re: Blood and roses. by backstreetdreamer |
12-Feb-05/7:34 PM |
I can't believe I'm saying this, but if this had actually been a prose poem, I might have given it a higher score. And don't use "evermore" ever or more.
*8*
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