| Re: The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485 |
4-Nov-03/9:11 PM |
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This is what most think of my writing:0)
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| Re: Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485 |
4-Nov-03/9:20 PM |
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In memory of my weak heart:o)
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| Re: BREATH by ShaNoN+960317485 |
4-Nov-03/9:28 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Nov-03/9:44 PM |
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id hate to be you, if god sez "I've seen all... And all of this is bad":o). But 2 tell ya the truth - to be this gud u must really be insane. Hope u remain that way:o)
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| Re: Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485 |
4-Nov-03/10:02 PM |
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
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| Re: Memory by SILYLILGURL |
8-Nov-03/2:24 AM |
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I thought Italy is inclusive of everywhere, must be that i am wrong. If u ask a fool he wud nod n say this is great; since i am one myself i'd also nod n say u wanted 2 say more but u chose less. Just rem that anything that haunts is never short. Hence in the end i gota say its worth a 08max no more no less:o)
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| Re: 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly |
8-Nov-03/2:31 AM |
id hate 2 see ya in the rest o the week - what wud u be doing i hate 2 ponder...But liked ya ideas of childish n simple methods fr suicide. It brings in a strong end of the stick called emotion into the pic..
super wud be a mockery, but good wud be fair:o)
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Nov-03/2:42 AM |
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i hate the start but the end i like, mayhap cause drama is what i like. Most of all the repetitive instsistance ws cool..think ill grant u a 10 fr keep sake:o)
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| Re: Thoughts by tori |
8-Nov-03/2:48 AM |
tought never escape fr my brain has claws..a rusty cage borded up with a chunk of glass... enough id say to keep them in as a green house wud...n i think....
i think...darn the thought is stuck n i hv lost the keys....So long:o)
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| Re: Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
8-Nov-03/2:56 AM |
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Fr the love of the lord...what in gods name is this.. A fucking what...
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| Re: Understanding by hobojo |
8-Nov-03/6:42 AM |
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| Re: True Love by Mona Lisa |
8-Nov-03/6:48 AM |
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My hand touched me crotch & it did something akin to the hair... Thats not love...but if u had said lust - maybe just maybe worth a 10 from me:o(
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| Re: A Succubus Wedding Ceremony by SupremeDreamer |
8-Nov-03/6:57 AM |
the idle gods has be woken & of ye a scornchild is cursed to birth...
I luved its twists...nd liked the the build up:o)
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8-Nov-03/7:00 AM |
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my head's still chanting the lines like a western rerun...cheap n cool:o)
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| Re: Leaving in the Morning by leviathan |
8-Nov-03/7:04 AM |
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Hope the lord takes her in:o)
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| Re: The Burial by Mona Lisa |
8-Nov-03/7:06 AM |
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