on The wild runs by ShaNoN+960317485
4 Nov 2003, 9:11 PM
This is what most think of my writing:0)
on Heart Attack by ShaNoN+960317485
4 Nov 2003, 9:20 PM
In memory of my weak heart:o)
on BREATH by ShaNoN+960317485
4 Nov 2003, 9:28 PM
For my dear BREATH:o)
on some deleted poem
4 Nov 2003, 9:44 PM
id hate to be you, if god sez "I've seen all... And all of this is bad":o). But 2 tell ya the truth - to be this gud u must really be insane. Hope u remain that way:o)
on Through DUSK till DAWN by ShaNoN+960317485
4 Nov 2003, 10:02 PM
Dare should i call it a poem - nay. Its my tribute for all the wonders of this world that i have never seen nor felt in person, but came to love & cherish through the books i hath read in my childhood; as they were my only link to understand the plant & beauty lacking in Maldives. Thank you GOD & friends for allowing me to remember the names so i can write this, MY DREAM & my evolution to love the beauty in the folds of the night.
on Memory by SILYLILGURL
8 Nov 2003, 2:24 AM
I thought Italy is inclusive of everywhere, must be that i am wrong. If u ask a fool he wud nod n say this is great; since i am one myself i'd also nod n say u wanted 2 say more but u chose less. Just rem that anything that haunts is never short. Hence in the end i gota say its worth a 08max no more no less:o)
on 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly
8 Nov 2003, 2:31 AM
id hate 2 see ya in the rest o the week - what wud u be doing i hate 2 ponder...But liked ya ideas of childish n simple methods fr suicide. It brings in a strong end of the stick called emotion into the pic..
super wud be a mockery, but good wud be fair:o)
super wud be a mockery, but good wud be fair:o)
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2003, 2:42 AM
i hate the start but the end i like, mayhap cause drama is what i like. Most of all the repetitive instsistance ws cool..think ill grant u a 10 fr keep sake:o)
on Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
8 Nov 2003, 2:56 AM
Fr the love of the lord...what in gods name is this.. A fucking what...
on Understanding by hobojo
8 Nov 2003, 6:42 AM
123 i just dont know:o)
on A Succubus Wedding Ceremony by SupremeDreamer
8 Nov 2003, 6:57 AM
the idle gods has be woken & of ye a scornchild is cursed to birth...
I luved its twists...nd liked the the build up:o)
I luved its twists...nd liked the the build up:o)
on some deleted poem
8 Nov 2003, 7:00 AM
my head's still chanting the lines like a western rerun...cheap n cool:o)
on Leaving in the Morning by leviathan
8 Nov 2003, 7:04 AM
Hope the lord takes her in:o)
on The Burial by Mona Lisa
8 Nov 2003, 7:06 AM
Amen...