| Re: a comment on Buried pyramid by zodiac |
17-Mar-04/4:38 PM |
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sure. Rhyming prose. Got it.
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| Re: Buried pyramid by zodiac |
17-Mar-04/2:32 PM |
Nice details.
It's good prose Zodiac - what's the translation?
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| Re: What is the use of the lid? by A. Nomaly |
16-Mar-04/12:01 PM |
only one person I know ever uses the word "lacquered", but this has nothing to do with ass....
or does it...
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| Re: a comment on Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote |
14-Mar-04/12:26 PM |
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Where, please, did you get your form rules from?
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| Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 |
13-Mar-04/5:29 PM |
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people still wear those things? Horry shirt, what a roosah.
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| Re: Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT |
13-Mar-04/8:18 AM |
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I guess I liked it better when you threw the pineapple at her head.
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| Re: a comment on Being by horus8 |
12-Mar-04/1:17 PM |
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Yes, last time I was in Troy.
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| Re: The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld |
12-Mar-04/11:52 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Being by horus8 |
12-Mar-04/10:26 AM |
I'm referring to the "coup" as you call it - which I no longer care to discuss.
Beside the point, my eyes have seen plenty 'nuf of H8 in all his glory!
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| Re: a comment on Being by horus8 |
12-Mar-04/6:34 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Brethren by richa |
11-Mar-04/8:07 PM |
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um, is there sposed to be a second "p" in the third line...?
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| Re: a comment on Aesgntor by MacFrantic |
11-Mar-04/8:01 PM |
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not too shabby at all! Just gets a little busy, but its quite an epic.
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| Re: Brethren by richa |
11-Mar-04/8:41 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Brethren by richa |
11-Mar-04/7:39 AM |
Okay, then I get the title. But now I'm stuck with the dichotomy between Quakers and science/progress...
They're running out of time? Ultimately these girls will betray themselves and their clan with idividuality and joining the outside world?
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| Re: Aesgntor by MacFrantic |
11-Mar-04/7:13 AM |
Flows fairly well - thinking "Sancturies" should not be plural, but possessive.
Got pulled right through the first third, (was thinking, "this is a ten, this is a ten") then I had trouble following the story ("...9....8...") - might be more complex than it needs to be?
How does one pronounce "Aesgntor?"
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| Re: a comment on Brethren by richa |
11-Mar-04/7:06 AM |
but doesn't the word "brethren" indicate brotherhood [with a solemn or religious tone]?
I very much like the sounds this makes, but the logic eludes me. Still not getting the Sir Newton angle.
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| Re: Brethren by richa |
10-Mar-04/7:43 PM |
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my turn to look stupid; I don't unnastand.
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| Re: Causation by fevriere |
10-Mar-04/7:35 AM |
Is not too bad, really.
I hesitate slightly at some of the rhymes (arrive and alive) in particular and a couple grammar issues (...essay fast - fast wants to be an adverb and is not) - and I'm usually pretty easy going with that kind of thing in poetry.
It does a nice job at conveying the loss
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| Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT |
9-Mar-04/7:41 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
8-Mar-04/4:47 AM |
and your predictable retort - the other angle was that I'm referring to my own included haiku.
And thank you for showing me the word "Limpest" for the first time in print.
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