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20 most recent comments by Shuushin (721-740) and replies

Re: a comment on Buried pyramid by zodiac 17-Mar-04/4:38 PM
sure. Rhyming prose. Got it.
Re: Buried pyramid by zodiac 17-Mar-04/2:32 PM
Nice details.

It's good prose Zodiac - what's the translation?
Re: What is the use of the lid? by A. Nomaly 16-Mar-04/12:01 PM
only one person I know ever uses the word "lacquered", but this has nothing to do with ass....

or does it...

Re: a comment on Your silhouette still drinks at my table by Don-Quixote 14-Mar-04/12:26 PM
Where, please, did you get your form rules from?
Re: My Boyfriend's Afro Pick by horus8 13-Mar-04/5:29 PM
people still wear those things? Horry shirt, what a roosah.
Re: Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT 13-Mar-04/8:18 AM
I guess I liked it better when you threw the pineapple at her head.
Re: a comment on Being by horus8 12-Mar-04/1:17 PM
Yes, last time I was in Troy.
Re: The Destination of the Unborn Child by DeadtotheWorld 12-Mar-04/11:52 AM
Title rocks.
Re: a comment on Being by horus8 12-Mar-04/10:26 AM
I'm referring to the "coup" as you call it - which I no longer care to discuss.

Beside the point, my eyes have seen plenty 'nuf of H8 in all his glory!
Re: a comment on Being by horus8 12-Mar-04/6:34 AM
yeah... about that...
Re: a comment on Brethren by richa 11-Mar-04/8:07 PM
um, is there sposed to be a second "p" in the third line...?
Re: a comment on Aesgntor by MacFrantic 11-Mar-04/8:01 PM
not too shabby at all! Just gets a little busy, but its quite an epic.
Re: Brethren by richa 11-Mar-04/8:41 AM
sold.
Re: a comment on Brethren by richa 11-Mar-04/7:39 AM
Okay, then I get the title. But now I'm stuck with the dichotomy between Quakers and science/progress...

They're running out of time? Ultimately these girls will betray themselves and their clan with idividuality and joining the outside world?
Re: Aesgntor by MacFrantic 11-Mar-04/7:13 AM
Flows fairly well - thinking "Sancturies" should not be plural, but possessive.

Got pulled right through the first third, (was thinking, "this is a ten, this is a ten") then I had trouble following the story ("...9....8...") - might be more complex than it needs to be?

How does one pronounce "Aesgntor?"
Re: a comment on Brethren by richa 11-Mar-04/7:06 AM
but doesn't the word "brethren" indicate brotherhood [with a solemn or religious tone]?

I very much like the sounds this makes, but the logic eludes me. Still not getting the Sir Newton angle.
Re: Brethren by richa 10-Mar-04/7:43 PM
my turn to look stupid; I don't unnastand.
Re: Causation by fevriere 10-Mar-04/7:35 AM
Is not too bad, really.

I hesitate slightly at some of the rhymes (arrive and alive) in particular and a couple grammar issues (...essay fast - fast wants to be an adverb and is not) - and I'm usually pretty easy going with that kind of thing in poetry.

It does a nice job at conveying the loss
Re: a comment on Woman in the purple cotton jacket(repaired) by INTRANSIT 9-Mar-04/7:41 PM
hey - thanks.
Re: a comment on Metametahaiku by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Mar-04/4:47 AM
and your predictable retort - the other angle was that I'm referring to my own included haiku.

And thank you for showing me the word "Limpest" for the first time in print.


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