| Re: mass transit by silentcat |
31-Jul-02/10:14 AM |
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I feel you in the worst way... well put, Da1
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| Re: scarred by TheVampireLeStan |
31-Jul-02/10:13 AM |
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Gothic confessions, no? you must wear long sleeves
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| Re: You Were There by danevie |
31-Jul-02/10:10 AM |
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| Re: Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn |
31-Jul-02/10:08 AM |
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this should be printed on condom packages to increase sales, cuz DAMN! It's just lovely enough...Da1 w/ no lubrication --smile--
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| Re: The Wrong Choice by TheVampireLeStan |
31-Jul-02/9:58 AM |
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inspirational and a profound illustration of the true consequence a foolish action... Da1 (my sister tried to commit suicide)
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| Re: What Does it Mean to be Human by Sterling5583 |
31-Jul-02/9:47 AM |
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opinionated but i guess that's "poetry"...Keep it up and as real as possible, Da1
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| Re: Angelic Triumvirate by Sterling5583 |
31-Jul-02/9:40 AM |
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| Re: red snow by sainthypro |
31-Jul-02/9:21 AM |
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oooohh, deep indeed. Could probably do without the second "dreaming, scheming" in stanza2. or not? Da1 said it.
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| Re: Lonely Night by faded |
31-Jul-02/9:13 AM |
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A lifetime on the flipside... I definitely like, Da1
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| Re: Glory Bound by kazeaki |
31-Jul-02/9:08 AM |
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profound & illustrious... would go good with a danish and a machiatto right about now... Da1(on an empty stomach)
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| Re: Another Faceless Vulgar by danzigg |
31-Jul-02/9:03 AM |
This peice is providentially elegent and well organized... Da1, holla back.
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| Re: The Way You Could Say Nothing (But still I understood) by frostygirl |
30-Jul-02/11:03 PM |
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lovely, in a Dawson's Creek sort of way.. but it puts you there...Da1 says U GO GIRL, get your frost on
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| Re: IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8 |
30-Jul-02/10:54 PM |
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| Re: IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8 |
30-Jul-02/10:52 PM |
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| Re: IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8 |
30-Jul-02/10:50 PM |
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I feel this is a masterpeice spewed from and afflicted mind of illicit fantasy. i am impressed w/ your diversity, but remaining humorousness... Da1 a man of few validating words
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| Re: CoffeeNoBody by webguy |
30-Jul-02/8:14 PM |
Man that poem was 'STUPID BANANAS',
w/ a starbucks twist on the nightlife that was just JUICY CRAZY... Da1 said to be heard
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| Re: the lips of your mouth by silvertongueddevil |
30-Jul-02/8:04 PM |
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| Re: Cherished Childhood by Sigh'ense... |
30-Jul-02/7:55 PM |
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well im out for the week until the next moon, see you soon... i wish we could submit more than 4 poems at a time but im patient. over anxiousness is the death of us all
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| Re: Cherished Childhood by Sigh'ense... |
30-Jul-02/7:52 PM |
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thanks for your support and i can particularly appreciate how you present a dimented saavy about you craft. good luck with your career and family Horus
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