Re: Coloring Loss by molly	30-Jul-02/7:22 PM
there should be visual artwork of some medium created in concordance w/ this intire poem, because it is literary art in its own essence...Da1 thinks he's in love.--smile-- --i said smile damnit!--
Re: Disenchanted by molly	30-Jul-02/7:14 PM
"woman" and "change", my bad. ..Da1
Re: Disenchanted by molly	30-Jul-02/7:12 PM
well I quess you told me. Color me crunchy. by the way yet another mezmorizing peice and im not just trying to get in your knockers.it's so innocent and prissy if you arent a women you should get a sex cahnge
Re: HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi	30-Jul-02/6:52 PM
"realise" is actually spelled "realize"... just something I... noticed. 4 future referrence, Da1
Re: My Life as a Book by molly	30-Jul-02/6:47 PM
I'd love to secretly read your diary...--smile-- conjuctively uprising and amusing... says Da1 w/ lip gloss handy.
Re: Her Wildfire Addiction by molly	30-Jul-02/6:43 PM
A bleeding heart, is the spark of this worlds retribution from the dark... Keep caring girl, Da1....
Re: Compassion by Kashi	30-Jul-02/5:11 PM
it makes you think, but in my opinion( if itmatters at all) it needs more poess and exclusiveness. in other words, " it would be better if the beginning line was developed possibly or if there was more of a revelation in its conclusion, like I've gathered you were shooting for.. anywayz, maybe both would help. just a though, Da1.and feel free to disect in contrivence over my work, i would be honored.
Re: Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense...	30-Jul-02/4:31 PM
I truly appreciate the critque Horus. Good lookin', and stay up. Da1
Re: To Kiss by Jody Conn	30-Jul-02/4:12 PM
VERY LOVELY INDEED
Re: liberation by silentcat	30-Jul-02/4:03 PM
GONE HEAD WICHA SELF...
Re: Too Late by ObiWonKn	30-Jul-02/3:59 PM
how sad