Re: A holiday warning by INTRANSIT	15-Dec-02/5:20 PM
alright. damnit, this needs immediate surgery for if you can't, i'm sure you shan't be fearing the biege and teals.
Re: The City (Sodom) by blkarak	15-Dec-02/5:29 PM
crazy..chicago meets the ten commandments..now this is a fucking great little ditty..complicated rhyme scheme, powerful nouns, self adjusting adjectives and an beginning, and arc, and an end, here's a ten there's a similarity here that matches up to alot of your other works here...it's hard to shake a style.in'n't.
Re: Am I Still Here? by Ranger	16-Dec-02/12:31 PM
very, very, clever.inventive, amusing. it left me smiling, but still in truth..i hate you. very much..every fiber of your midget with a bum leg demeanor..may your finger nails explode, and your tonsils grow back unevenly.
Re: (Rough Draft) The Adventures of Zoot and Corky by Owner of the Sky	16-Dec-02/12:41 PM
people are strange, submissive dominant sex is the rave of the future, because it was the rave of the past. tension builds and creates. where's the backstory here? gone. leaving the reader with an empty space to fill using their own imaginations. that can be good and bad que no. a good spanking and dinner on the floor does loads for a struggling relationship..well, much more than an overpaid JEW shrink none the less. nice poem.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Dec-02/12:51 PM
trainspotting without the train, you wouldn't know methadone from robitussin on a good day, but it must amuse you to see your family and friends so hooked. have no fear i'm sure your addicted to more...proper afflictions, that pale in comparisson such as shopping for shoes and razor slicing your thighs with iodine win the pain gets to be so much..ha, the strain of an overdue test or paper, a blow dryer on the fritz. clever indeed. you make me sick, have a ten, naw a nine. cuz you left out gay/uhhum hum sex with transvestites who have hiv and mainlining methamphetamine, habits, habits Ba-. cheers!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Dec-02/12:52 PM
ten.
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Dec-02/12:54 PM
But, what does he become after he's drowned..a boogie board for another one. dude. sweet.
Re: Thorns by poetandknowit	17-Dec-02/12:24 AM
LAMENT "Cry not, my baby. Cry. I know a frog ate a white moth. The frog did not cry. That's why he's a frog. The moth did not cry. My baby, cry not. Cry. There is much to do. I will cry too. I will cry for you. Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..
Re: setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit	17-Dec-02/12:41 AM
AESTHETIC THEORY "Contrive a poem out of ears. Tell it so that its petals unchocolate like a brain in a jar Wax walnut, melting with thought. Make it a poem almost lewdly knowledgable and make its knowledge ooze, syrup from the punched trunk. Make it snake up to the molecule whorey and put its mouth atomic against the mouth of its core. Pull on its stem to expose its foetus. Make it have children with sleek ginger jaws, make the dogs moan when it passes, let it out of its jar make it lie with our corpse, our chaos. Make it hungry, evil, enemy of Death. Put it on paper. Read it. Make surgery its sigh, and of such sting the scorpions call it Jehovah & Who. Make it now before you crapout. Contrive it, sperm it, stroke it, make it efficient, make it fit, make it more poem than Poem can survive." Stan Rice, Some Lamb 1975..
Re: Mind of War by t_t_redhot	17-Dec-02/8:11 PM
this is nothing like stans rice work, so don't listen to that guy who can right a poem in 126 seconds while listening to culturally significant jazz and oops goddamnit plugging up the toilet for the bluecollar people on the first snow of winter in 126 seconds. hooray for the muted trumpet and a drunk snacking too much at three in the morning. this poem is a bit passe and bland, but it hangs well and gets the point across simple enough.d
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	17-Dec-02/11:24 PM
this is still beyond anything vaguely gaseous. shine on you crazy diamond
Re: UltraSound by UnityMitford	19-Dec-02/1:18 PM
congradulations! sorry for horus's comment it came out wrong he mumbles out loud..see it's like this sometimes you read something and instantaneously you subconciously mutter things symbols something flashes in your head then its out, and because recently he was involved intimately in some of those symbol flashes he might of thought you wrote the piece towards his situation in a good way, and he was just responding as if he had been asked a question, and then it came out like that.......i know everything will be well with you and yours i give you my blessing and love in a sentence. You are a wonderfull person, healthy and good. You will be a loving and teaching parent, and you are already..you have our best wishes and true love and faith and respect pulling for you and yours this holiday season..yours truly, Bachus, horus and Baba. So mote it be. because it is. have a ten for your picture and your sound.y
Re: requiem for an ex-girlfriend by natalie	19-Dec-02/1:52 PM
brilliant.
Re: Hunt by cobalt	19-Dec-02/1:53 PM
DUCK KILLER!
Re: The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar	19-Dec-02/1:53 PM
always a hoot.X
Re: Stockport by Nicholas Jones	19-Dec-02/1:55 PM
you'd know.o
Re: THE PRICE OF LIVING FOREVER by LETO	19-Dec-02/4:13 PM
unicorn blood and strudels. no!
regarding some deleted poem...	19-Dec-02/4:42 PM
a powerful sentiment. the more you need the less you get.l
Re: Form Without Substance by Quarton	19-Dec-02/6:35 PM
anything but a crying clown, lordy. "Fresh washed flora covered with grime". funny. quantum physics aye. jesus. here, i got one for you. i walked inside just to be let out. because...well..the cosmic dance said i could.
Re: The Dance by Quarton	19-Dec-02/6:38 PM
this is sharp and true to form though. "the perceived cosmic dancers but illusion" my personal favorite.