Re: Belongings by Christof	23-Jun-03/12:00 AM
Absolutely poetry at it's best
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/12:04 AM
Hi John
regarding some deleted poem...	23-Jun-03/12:34 AM
That's supreme dreamimg. I fell asleep three times and I just injected amphetamines. I could squash this into a haiku, and say more for your observations, notice. A supreme dream w/extra sourcream and a diet tab An Haiku by Errr Ah, Well-when-it-comes-to-me-I'll get-back-with-you. I know it's a mouthfull but hey, that's Hawaians for you. Thanks mom & dad, but How long is this going to take? If you love me leave.
Re: Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom	23-Jun-03/8:48 PM
Precisely why I'm bisexual. A summer and winter home. If I could offer you some advice it would be take more risks, and find and mix layerably more stimulating subjects and materials. For example, put tis poem inside of a diner with al of the weird characters that would accompany the diner of your imagination, 100 year old waitress with a tit job. gay tough guy rapist trucker, and so on. think U turn (the movie) then mix in this subtextualesque story of a chick that ignores you piece. capeesh.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jun-03/2:58 PM
A shit yogurt with shit sprinkles. what you've done here is taken an okay movie plot and try to tell it back to us (as if were that stupid to have not watched a Pacino flick?) using the same fucking title of the movie from the perspective 'this time' of your sad stupid tiny uninformed brain. Gooooood, super, next
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Jun-03/3:13 PM
Hi, I'm a poet, my names Foreskinner, i also play bass in the speed metal band called "I ate careal out of my dead mother's vulva" we have a show this weekend at the Sizzler in Chino, Ca. Come check it out. We're giving away our new cd called the "Shitngdom of Shitvil' and dude, it's the shit.
Re: speed weed by Freethinker1602	28-Jun-03/9:28 AM
okay, and then?
Re: Creating A Bitch by Kitch	28-Jun-03/9:02 PM
"and did do convincingly" please don't be a booger eater on my shift. Remove the 'do' for christ sake. And never use a mediocre movie for the last line of a poem, ever. And being a Bitch is inherited actually, normally from a feminine role model in close constant vicinity during the rearing of the said CHILD.
Re: Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:09 PM
Dude, you need to go out on the town or to the lake with someone that knows what in the fuck they are doing, because this is reaching everywhere and getting no where. can I edit it for you? Good god I split my pants just about roaring at your observations, not that they are shite, just put to structure with a style and mood that's boring and to riskless. Let me edit this and teach you my style for handling this kind of predicament. Deal?
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/2:12 PM
That's too bad, since his poetry clearly outclasses the majority of shit on this sight hands down. Tsk.
Re: I Wonder by EmicaX	1-Jul-03/2:19 PM
Take a fucking picture.
Re: Globetrotter by bondjedi	1-Jul-03/2:21 PM
lol
Re: I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K	1-Jul-03/3:10 PM
priceless
Re: Blind Walk Into Poem Ranker by DreamerSupreme	1-Jul-03/3:19 PM
Charming.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/3:44 PM
Why? So I could call it "Backhand" and slap the shit out of you again? Please, See, I know when too not waste my time any longer on a tired subject. It's too easy John.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/6:48 PM
"..[].." Never, I brought a space ship named Homer with an eloctronical vulva that can make meringue for lemons.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/6:57 PM
muahah
Re: Introduction by Decree... by Wulf	1-Jul-03/7:06 PM
Superb up until the last five lines then it goes a bit soft.
regarding some deleted poem...	1-Jul-03/8:14 PM
Shit, I can't log out, BASTARDS! Don't make me take the bus hostage and make a movie called "Speeing"
Re: flaming breasts by Freethinker1602	1-Jul-03/10:57 PM
As agnostic as a bag of flaming puppy coca.