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flaming breasts (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I feel the waking of the beast inside my head
My soul filled of loathing
And my lungs filled of fire
Talk to me and I'll set your world spinning
I am what was corrupted at youth
For the spirits there is no cnosolation
Every step I take curses the ground beneath me
The logic of a passed life losens grip
I see the world in a new light
All that is unmolested is mine for the taking
I will be the determining factor for greed
The downfall of innocence started with one
It shall continue with many
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11308
Posted: July 1, 2003 10:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2003 10:24 PM PDT
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