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flaming breasts (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I feel the waking of the beast inside my head My soul filled of loathing And my lungs filled of fire Talk to me and I'll set your world spinning I am what was corrupted at youth For the spirits there is no cnosolation Every step I take curses the ground beneath me The logic of a passed life losens grip I see the world in a new light All that is unmolested is mine for the taking I will be the determining factor for greed The downfall of innocence started with one It shall continue with many

Up the ladder: Free
Down the ladder: looking for him

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11303
Posted: July 1, 2003 10:24 PM PDT; Last modified: July 1, 2003 10:24 PM PDT
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[6] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Jul-03/10:57 PM | Reply
As agnostic as a bag of flaming puppy coca.
[3] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 2-Jul-03/3:50 AM | Reply
Great Title. VERY Banal Poem. -3-
[5] smlink84 @ 68.98.135.98 | 8-Jul-03/8:40 PM | Reply
All three of you are the same person. How do I know this you ask? You see, God has ordained this information to my knowledge. Don't belive, "Kathryn H."
Your poem is very "poetic"
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